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September 9, 2019 at 12:00 AM
I think you need an editor but it's an okay premise so far.
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July 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this story i hope you finish it soon!
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July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting story i hope you update soon!
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May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
up date soon please I really liked the story
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November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very good story, please continue!
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August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lov the story update soon
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August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello there! I'm sorry to hear that you are going through some hard times. I really do hope that things lighten up soon!
Your story is really good. I like the ideal where this is going. But I hate to say the last chapter 7 seem a bit chop up. I'm not trying to be mean. I really like to read more. But the last chapter seems to be cut up and could use some editing. I know you will fix it later or what ever. I lot of times post the unedit vision before my beta fix it. When she is done I re-post it. I'm pretty sure that's what is going on. I really suck at grammer and spelling and wording.
Please update soon as you can. Could you email me when you do? my email is suniko_jubi@yahoo.com
Take care!
Suniko
Your story is really good. I like the ideal where this is going. But I hate to say the last chapter 7 seem a bit chop up. I'm not trying to be mean. I really like to read more. But the last chapter seems to be cut up and could use some editing. I know you will fix it later or what ever. I lot of times post the unedit vision before my beta fix it. When she is done I re-post it. I'm pretty sure that's what is going on. I really suck at grammer and spelling and wording.
Please update soon as you can. Could you email me when you do? my email is suniko_jubi@yahoo.com
Take care!
Suniko
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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh looks like trouble for kagome and sesshoumaru!! what will ever happen to the couple? please update soon!!
is kikyo going to be apart of this story, i hope not?!
is kikyo going to be apart of this story, i hope not?!
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLease update soon! Really good start!
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just finish reading your story and its pretty good. Just be careful with spelling you have a few spelling errors. PLease update soon i would like to know what else Sesshomaru going to do to make Kagome submit.