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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahh the beauty and danger of assume. It makes an @ss of u and me. Keiko realy contributed to the problem with that one, but Yuusake's might have made a similar mistake if he had seen Kagome and Kaede himself. Everyone siding with Yuusake based on false information happens far too often. Well done reflection of reality. Very nice two piece. I look forward to seeing any other pieces featuring these two that you might be inspired to write in the future.
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Glad that Yusuke got his head out of his ass. Leave it to Souta to set things right, I wish my younger brother was like that but well.. I just aint that lucky lol Good chapter, I enjoyed reading this. Keep up the good work.
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!
I... WOW!
... I'm at a loss for words, my heart is too broken. POOR YUSUKE! I hope you update soon. This overwhelming empathy I feel for Yusuke is too much.
I... WOW!
... I'm at a loss for words, my heart is too broken. POOR YUSUKE! I hope you update soon. This overwhelming empathy I feel for Yusuke is too much.
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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice for a Kagome/Yusuke pairing. It was so sad, I hope you are going to add on to it. And you DO NOT need a beta. Your stories are very readable and with little mistakes. Unlike a lot of the trash I see on this site. I won't mention any names but I'm sure the other readers know which stuff I'm talking about. Really aggravating when your stuff and other decent authors are told to get a beta but the trash gets no comment and gets rated with a high star. Considering you have no beta you do well. That is obvious a reviewer that is jealous of your writing talents and needs to pipe down. Keep up the wonderful work.
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I recommend you find a Beta, I say this as a word of advise don't put a diva fit for that.
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great story on another great pair.
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why do you keep writing Yusuke x Kagome stories that break my heart? If I develop a severe case of broken heart syndrome, it'll be because of your fics, but most especially because of the Yusuke x Kagome ones. They're so heartbreaking!
I don't shed tears or feel like crying, but I feel like an invisible hand is squeezing my heart. Maybe I'm having a mild heartattack, but it couldn't be a coincidence because it only happens when I read your Yusuke x Kagome fics. Ah! Please please PLEASE update this one soon. I LOVE Hate's Allure as well but it also broke my heart. Please have mercy on me. ;___;
I don't shed tears or feel like crying, but I feel like an invisible hand is squeezing my heart. Maybe I'm having a mild heartattack, but it couldn't be a coincidence because it only happens when I read your Yusuke x Kagome fics. Ah! Please please PLEASE update this one soon. I LOVE Hate's Allure as well but it also broke my heart. Please have mercy on me. ;___;
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've really gotta feel for Yusuke right about now. I'm sure Raizen's question of have you ever been in love makes more sense to him now. Hopefully Kagome won't take too long in coming back. Good chapter, update soon please.
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was very well written and beautiful in a bittersweet sort of way, will Kagome come back? Anyway, keep up the good work!
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Only you could write a story that has a very good lemon and so sad at the same time. Love it. Update soon!