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Wow! So glad to see more of this story!! I wondered if she would turn up pregnant. But the whole thing about the jewel was totally unexpected and really cool. Gee, she sure has a little potty mouth, doesn't she? Didn't she used to tell Inuyasha not to talk like that? Heh heh! What a horrible way for the truth to come out -- in front of everybody like that. (Liked the tidbit about Hojo not being able to have kids. LOL!) So, they've come to an understanding of sorts, but Yusuke still hasn't explained why he treated her the way he did? Even after she confessed she loved him? For a touch kickass priestess, she was kind of wimpy and whiny about the whole pregnancy, childbirth thing, wasn't she? Can't wait to see what happens now that the baby is born. If Midoriko's soul isn't in the jewel anymore, then it's all youkai. Seems Kagome would need to keep in touch with it at all times to keep it pure. Looking forward to her and Yusuke finding their way to each other.

i really like how the story reality check is comeing along. hope u make a part 3 of this one, i want to see wat happens.....its really good and i cant wait

Just had to re-read your second story -- it's SO good! Please, please, please finish it!! I've got to find out how Yusuke and Kagome see each other again. And will she tell him what happened? Will he apologize for treating her so badly? I've got to know!!

Awww man! please update soon! thats just plain wrong! >,< poor kagome and damn yusuke for acting like a damn kid and bitching at kagome just because he liked her, yeah he wanted to stay faithful to his wife but he took it to far!. Hojo's a bastard and keiko sucks too. yusuke needs to get his head out his ass and talk to kagome. and kagome needs to tell yusuke the trueth so he can relize just how far up his ass he was! (angrey tear) for the love of Kami love should not suck this much!

Ps- its a great fic and I hope to read more soon.

...Well geez - you HAVE to update this one now! Everything's gone to hell!! haha - but it's a fantastic piece of writing. Love it. :)

Okay I've read what you have posted and I have to say DAMN!!! I mean that has to be the best two Yusuke/Kagome fics I've ever read. I have to say you've really brought this pairing into a new light. Please update soon. I don't think I can wait much longer for an update. I'll be watching for it.

update soon, There aren't nearly enough yusuke/kagome pairings as there ought to be... not even restricting it only to well written ones, so its a double win with these stories of yours. Their personalities mesh so much better than yusuke/keiko.. maybe because keiko is like a much more annoying hojo (I'm less forgiving of keiko since she is aware of yusuke's past, signed up to be the girlfriend, yet is a constant wet blanket)... speaking of which, hojo as usual is completely ignorant of kagome's past, but in this most recent story of yours, is ever one else as ignorant of the details as well?

Anyhow, keep up the good work!

AAAH!!! That was fantastic! I can never stop being amazed at how your stories can invoke so many emotions from me so much. SO BLOODY COOL! Now Kagome thinks that Yusuke wanted to hit her and how the heck are they ever going to hook up?

Oh a violent followup to the first chapter, I love it. Can't wait to see what the outcome of this one is. You've definitely got a talent at writing pissed off Yusuke, sometimes I wish I had a handle on his character like you do. Ah well, can't wait to read more. Update soon please.

Wow! Absolutely loved it! Fabulous chapter! Loved Kurama, Kuwabara, and Shizuru being in it -- even in small, supporting roles. Great set-up! Can't wait for the finale! Glad Keiko and Hojo paired up. Interesting that Hojo still loves Kagome, though, and isn't sure which woman he wants. Let's let Yusuke make up his mind for him. It's going to be so great seeing how you get him and Kagome to 'fess up. He was AWFULLY rough on her -- poor girl. Always falling for the rude, brash, uber-sexy ones. I hope you write more SOON! It's on my Christmas wish list.