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for Fingering Moonbeams

by drkstareyes

person Pastel
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. I hope you update soon. I want to see how Kagome acts once she finds out that she isn't allowed anywhere without Sesshoumaru.
person Lissa
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see your next chapters. Great story. (Haha. The old wolf going to the vet will be funny. Why doesn't Kagome sense that he is youkai? Is he able to hide/disguise/block that or something?) Good luck in college. I just graduated myself.
person Seren1tystar01
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi there! I just wanted to say that I am in love with your story! I can't wait for the next installment. I must say that this is the only Vampire story that involved Inuyasha and gang that I like. I love that you are actually giving an original plot. There are so many authors out there that can't seem to do that. I hope you finish this quickly, so I don't go insane with waiting!
I would also like to offer my services if you are ever in need of someone to work on grammar, spelling, or just proof reading.
Thanks,
Amanda
person lady everest
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you took my suggestions! THANKS!

Keep updating!
person lady everest
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The "Kagome gets turns into a vampire" thing has been used over and over again. PLEASE don't use it in this fic.

Very exciting and interesting beginning.

It'd be nice if Kagome could help Sesshomaru control his urge to kill.
person Inari
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please continue, I really like your story.
person ptbear
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Update soon. Can't wait to see how and when they bring back Sesshomaru and how he gets a hold of Kagome.