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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have been looking around this site and nothing comes close to this its such a great fic I love the fact that you can mix pain and love perfectly keep the chapters comming =)
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May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i just wanted to let you know i love your story.. and that someone stole it and turned it into crap.. Dark Angel stole your story and called it Rough Fun.. i just thought you should know about it.. please keep writing!
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... how to rate this story... *lookes in dictionary* Ah, here we go, Horrendously horrorfying with excessive amounts of humiliating halarity. A.k.a , your one sick fuck. (Dont worry, I still like this story, WRITE MORE!)
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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was good right up until the defecation scene. Please edit that out.
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
School sucks, but write for like 10 minutes a day or something?
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October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay i love this sexual story more lemon please and make it super rough. please and thx
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is getting very interesting, please keep it going!!
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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, but it didn't even really get to the yuri part, it was more like a naked catfight. I mean, if the catfight led to sex, then you know, it would work. But anyway, when you change scenes, you should double-space between the paragraphs or put something in between them so that the readers know that you're changing scenes.
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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chappies! I'm really beginning to love these stories. It's good to have a change every once in a while. I hope you update REALLY soon!
~Elisa
~Elisa