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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
at first i was like..ugg where is this goin...NOW...im like THIS is really good. please update soon!
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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this story! the twists and turns. the fact that kagome is different but the same. it's awesome!! update soon!
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg kags is gonna be imbarresed when
she wakes up is inu gonna find out why is
she doing this for thats just weird as hell
u could always say she did not pass high
school because she stayed in the fudal
era and failed and she needed money to survive
and this is all she could do thats just a thought
update soon its so funny i want to no wat shes
gonna do once figures it is sess and not a dream or some thing
she wakes up is inu gonna find out why is
she doing this for thats just weird as hell
u could always say she did not pass high
school because she stayed in the fudal
era and failed and she needed money to survive
and this is all she could do thats just a thought
update soon its so funny i want to no wat shes
gonna do once figures it is sess and not a dream or some thing
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is such a fantastic story. I love the whole Kagome being a stripper to help out her little brother and stuff. This is an enchanting story; it has so many twists and turns. Moreover, what InuYasha did was so horrible; I can’t believe that he did that to Kagome. I can’t imagine how she feels right now.
Your plot is good quality I especially like the whole Sesshoumaru taking over Kagome’s life. Oh God, it was so cute when Sesshoumaru told Kagome that he wanted to be her friend. I actually didn’t see it coming and it was a great teaser for me.
I am actually glad you killed off the grandparent and mother. Not that I am saying killing someone is a good thing. However, I find that if the mother or grandfather were still alive it would take away from your story.
That is the whole reason why Kagome is working in the strip club and Sesshoumaru meets her, because she is trying to earn money for Sota, school and his school. You have a great talent, and I loved the way you killed Naraku. That was genius; I never thought having Kagome and Sesshoumaru team up like THAT was actually something plausible.
Great story, I look forward to the next chapter. And the lemon.
Bi
Your plot is good quality I especially like the whole Sesshoumaru taking over Kagome’s life. Oh God, it was so cute when Sesshoumaru told Kagome that he wanted to be her friend. I actually didn’t see it coming and it was a great teaser for me.
I am actually glad you killed off the grandparent and mother. Not that I am saying killing someone is a good thing. However, I find that if the mother or grandfather were still alive it would take away from your story.
That is the whole reason why Kagome is working in the strip club and Sesshoumaru meets her, because she is trying to earn money for Sota, school and his school. You have a great talent, and I loved the way you killed Naraku. That was genius; I never thought having Kagome and Sesshoumaru team up like THAT was actually something plausible.
Great story, I look forward to the next chapter. And the lemon.
Bi
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was so nice!!! sesshomaru rocks yayayayay please upadate tottaly love it!!
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahhhh poor kagome she lost her job got a new1 now she might see inuyasha
i hopes she sees inuyasha that would be good
storys way better than great so far
UPDATE SOON
i hopes she sees inuyasha that would be good
storys way better than great so far
UPDATE SOON