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June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thank you for updating again. i love this story and I look forward to new chapters. THANKS!
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June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another update!!!! That makes me happy! ^_^ He saved her, whoo hoo! Of course we all knew he would! This is like one of my favorite fics on here!
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June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh thank you for finally updating! and with such great chapter at that! i loved them! XD
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So first of all, great concept for a story. The characters are true to form, but I wish they were a little more fleshed out in personality. You don't hear a lot of their thoughts, just the general narration. Also, we're on chapter 21, and the story hasn't progressed very far at all.
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June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty awesome! I hope you continue.
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That's a pretty interesting to use your words and say the plotline 'was basic', it's still really good and entertaining, especially the newest development- a 'drunk and submissive Inuyasha (mayabe I should get one of those) Oh and I have like five more reasons to hate Kikyo now...I would've felt violated to D:
But I laughed when Inuyasha called her a fat hag. That was awesome xD
But I laughed when Inuyasha called her a fat hag. That was awesome xD
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May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aaahhh! that was amazing! you can just feel the sexual tension! it practically jumps off the pages like electricity! love the fic i'm glad your updating!
phoenix
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May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thanks!!! another chapter... i had to read the entire story again cause i had forgotten it.... i hope you can keep that motivation for updatin!!
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May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
im really glad you updated! i cant wait til ch. 20 is up!! love the fic cant wait to read more!! keep it up!
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May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So glad this is getting updated again regularly!
You tease! On many, many levels the reader is left hanging here-- surely Kikyo wouldn't have given him a full dose, would she? I mean she's the expert here, and has some 'greater' plan going on, that doesn't involve killing the titular hanyou.
Anyway good chapter, though it denied me the obvious humor of 'the boyfriend' catching them in a compromising position (innocent or not) ahh, well, can't have cheap humor every day, can I?
Thanks!
You tease! On many, many levels the reader is left hanging here-- surely Kikyo wouldn't have given him a full dose, would she? I mean she's the expert here, and has some 'greater' plan going on, that doesn't involve killing the titular hanyou.
Anyway good chapter, though it denied me the obvious humor of 'the boyfriend' catching them in a compromising position (innocent or not) ahh, well, can't have cheap humor every day, can I?
Thanks!