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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, i have tears in my eyes. that poem touched me so completely. i know it might mean something completely different to someone else, but it holds a special meaning for me and a situation i'm going through right now. that was a really amazing poem and it made me cry . . . you are truly talented if that poem is only a tenth or your writing ability. i hope to read more from you, stories and poems. =}
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I totally see Kagome feeling this way whenever she finds Inuyasha in the clay arms of Kikyo her predossesor and rival. The hurt that she feels whenever he goes to Kikyo. I could see her sitting there with her knees up and her chin resting there picking up the shards of her heart.
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved I crossed my broken heart (P[l not logged on lol)
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was great 5/5 really great keep it up chicka ^-^
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow
iv never read somthin so realting to me in poem form as u have done
great job
i loved it
iv never read somthin so realting to me in poem form as u have done
great job
i loved it