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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the story!!!
I just wish that it was longer....:)
Just keep up the good work!!
I just wish that it was longer....:)
Just keep up the good work!!
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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow ! Did she bear a mating mark yet ? In this case, I can't wait to see the reactions of Sesshomaru !!! That's interesting. Just a point : in french, the tittle is written like this : "Déjà vu". Good tittle I'd say, it just describes very well what's happened...
A french reader,
Bons baisers de France,
Merely Truth
A french reader,
Bons baisers de France,
Merely Truth
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story, can't wait to see where it goes.
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Update soon. Can't wait to read when Shin realizes he is really Sesshomaru and what goes on between the two.
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update soon. Great start.I would like to know what is wrong with Shin.
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice opening, i like it alot. I like how you've made shin aware of something but not what exactly, keep it up ^^
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow did sess die thats so
sad i wanna cry why oh why did sess have to die
its just not fair
but its a good story so far please continue it.
sad i wanna cry why oh why did sess have to die
its just not fair
but its a good story so far please continue it.
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I my gosh!!!! I love this so far!! This is sooo good!!!! Please up-date soon!!! I have to know what happens next!!! I love it!!! You have a new fan!!!!
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Overall, I like the concept of the story. Your writing style is good but it needs to be polished. Sometimes, Kagome and Shin speak in the same manner (very polite, eloquent and at times superfluous -- seems a little OOC). You give great descriptions of the scenery but skimp on the character descriptions during pivotal moments (such as right before we meet Shin; I have to assume a basic image of what Sesshoumaru would look like as a human teenager. What does he look like to you?) Anyway, good story. I look forward to the next chapter.