rate_review Reviews

This was a great story... I loved how you made Shin start to fight with his old self.. well i think thta's what was happening... that was cooL!!!! keep writing more I want to know what happens next.

It's just some corrections on your Japanese.

gomen-sorry
kirei-cute/pretty --- /beautiful
akai-red ------------ akaii-red
kieru- disappear! --- Dictionary form. In the actual verb it's kiemasu.
yamete-stop --------- yamete-stop in feminine form -> yamero-stop in masculine form
suman-sorry --------- sumimasen-excuse me; sorry

why do people who dont know japanese language beyond anime insist on using incorrect japanese in their fanfictions? *sigh*

I really liked this chapter a lot!! Not so much the whole Inuyasha thing, but oh well!! Loved the cammio of Shin's! Really cute!! Can not wait to see what happens next!!!

WOW! Like UPDATE SOON I LOVE THIS STORY wow why you stop there you rock ^-^

another great chapter from you... i wonder what'll happen next!
update as soon as possible please!

HI HI!!
Oh God Oh God Oh God!!!! xD
This sotry is amazing!!!!!
I love absolutely everythig! ;D The story-line, the characters, and of course: Sesshoumaru and Shin!!!! ^_^
Gods!! I wonder what'll happen now that Sess has seen "his" mark in Kagome's neck... and how Shin is doing in the "present". Is Shin going to pass through the well?? Because it'd be a one hell of a meeting between the Taiyoukai and his reincarnation... ^_^
Anyways... So Inuyasha is having a jealousy tantrum... and Sesshy is having fun with it xD Can't wait to see what'll happen next, along side with some fluff between Kags and Shin and/or Sesshy ^_^
Hope see you soon
Be$!7º$H..! 2 U(^.^)
Byes

please update!!
i really like this story, and ive got to see what happens next!!
please updatre soon!!!
-kerya^_^

i love this story. it's so awesome. and the twist, oh the mark! it's gonna get good. update soon1!

all I can say is....eeeeek, what's gonna happen next!!! Oh, and liked Shin and Kagome's grandfather meeting, heh. that was cool.