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by Crescentgray

person eva
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YEY!! what a wonderful chapter! i'm really enjoying your story!!! update soon ^.^
person Vyncent
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent update, and so good to see another chapter up. Please update soon.
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
VERY WELL DONE!!! I love it, wonderful plot and character development , you're amazing!
person vanessa
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your title could be Lost Memories...New found love. Good plot and the love developing between the two. update soon.
person eddie-KA!
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good to have you back!
hope all is well...please keep writing
i love it! =]
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
could his attitude after she used 'the word' be the combination of an inappropriate time to mention anything to do with yasha and it was used to show a perceived dominance?

good characterization of kohaku, one could sense his pain.

a pleasure,
ginny
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i cant read this theres to much detail
person Kennedy-Kins
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this - I really do. It has everything; a VERY good and well thought out plot - purpose - tension- hentai and of course it is very well written by its author ;-)

PLEASE continue to update!

person Kitsune
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I remember this stor. I've been waiting for it to be updated. Keep up the great work.
person hasu86
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
glad to see this story back up and running! i really loved the chapter, nice and deep, a little sad but happy, goodness, just a jumble of emotions. wonderful wonderful! continue soon!
-hasu86