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by Crescentgray

person river
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! I love this story!! Cookies for everyone!!
person Flippy
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was good but Inuyasha popping up was a bit of a letdown for me.
person hasu86
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
eh?!?!?! what do you mean two chapters left!? as in the end of this fic?! awww maaaannn!! but, i guess we'll definitely get to the smut then, hehe. excellent chapter as always! and yes, all that was a huge surprise and a jumble of emotions! came out of nowhere, or maybe there was something i missed but i was caught quite unawares by all their appearances! aiya, you've gotta continue pronto! i'm practically dying in anticipation already!!
-hasu86
person Kitsune
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hot!! as ever

dieing to read more
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
my favorite pairing is yash/kag but i'm not at all opposed to reading a good story.

this is interesting, intelligent, entertaining, and eloquently executed. i am curious as to why he brought her friends back (essential to the final battle?), what the reasons for yasha's inability or refusal to mark her, if kagome gets her memories back and how the whole memories of loving yash vs. her feelings and marked/mate standing with the tai-youkai are going to affect her emotionally.

a pleasure,
ginny

schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow. This is such an excellent story that I don't even know what to say.

So I will say that I like this, and keep up the good work.
person Waterlover_63
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am absolutely in love with this story line so far. I started to cry when i read the part where Kagome started to admit that she needed more time and then he all hugged her with such fierceness!! AHH!! I love it! so please please please write some more!!
person gwoman
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've only gotten through one chapter, but it was fabulously well written!! Superb characterization, wonderful descriptions...I was hooked after the second paragraph.
person gwoman
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, and i'd like to add my email address to the update list, please! not sure if it's showing, so it's cory.tripp@gmail.com
person madmiko
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so nicely done. Thanks so much for the email alert! It was such a nice treat. Your style of writing just flows beautifully, and the way you're slowly lifting the veil from kagome's eyes and memory is just right. Of course, I am still wondering about the details of the battle that left her with no memory, and the circumstances of her relationship with Inuyasha. There still seems to be a bit of a mystery surrounding that and his death. Is Sango dead? Because Kohaku didn't seem to know it if she was, and I think he would. It's been a while since I've read the rest of this, so my OWN memory is a bit hazy on the details. LOL!! I like Kagome's discoveries about herself and the fact that she seems to like them. That's a nice touch. And she made a decision. Only three more chapters, huh? I will be waiting anxiously for them!