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by Crescentgray

person Cochrann
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ya know, as much as I would have liked a more 'climactic' ending...this epiloque is perfect and flows beautifully with the rest of the story. All and all you've done an excellent job and I honestly envy your talent and dedication.
person The Mauve Hand
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Whistles, cheers, applause, stomping feet* Yay!! I loved it. It totally choked me up and that doesn't happen often. I love you!
person entropy9
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow... somehow I missed this until this morning...it's well, it's breathtaking, I'm a little disappointed that everyone is back (lol i know it's silly) and of course I'm glad everyone is alive, but I think you could have pulled it off if they had stayed dead...you seem to have talent, so a little death and solemn-ness is nothing you couldn't handle :-P

anyway, I'm enjoying this and I can't wait for the end...and as a side note, i read your profile and where it say's CG: write bitches, I misread it as 'writhe, bitches' and I though, man this girl has some serious kinks...lol just thought I'd share my insane musings.
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person clavira
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that's so sad! of course she should forgive him! what else could she do? but not before he tells her the truth, that's a given. he should probably tell her how he feels about her, but as i know him (of as you portraid him) he won't be doing that anytime soon...
oh well, i'm looking forward to your next update! (hopefully soon ;))
person Kitsune Rei
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Rocks as usual. Can't wait to see what happens now that Kagome's happy wizard of oz bubble has popped and reality has set in. Thank you for being one of so few of the writers out there who can put a story out in fanfictom that it literately legible, God Bless You.
person Biggles
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Outsanding
person Lexy
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg, you made me cry! plz say this isnt how it ends!!!
person Phoenix Wolf
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn!! What a hell of a chapter!

I can't wait to see what happens next! Will they eventually kill Naraku? Will Kagome ever forgive Sesshomaru for his ommitance?

Please upade as soon as you can! This story is wicked cool!

Until we meet again.
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have fallen in love with your story. I swore loudly when I came to the end of 'Rapture' and saw that I was S.O.L. concerning my closure. You've done an amazing job with this though, really. This was an instant favorite and hope hope hope you continue.
( hope hope hope hope )
( soon soon soon ?!?!??!)
Either way, wanted to let you know how awesome of a job I think you've done - mad props.
person Bluumberry
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's hard to find decent stories of this pairing these days. Yours is superb actually and probably one of the best, if not the best, I have ever read. The pure emotion you write is just amazing, as is the way you describe the development of feelings. I look forward to reading more and I hope it will be soon ^^