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I really enjoyed your story, especially because you completed it. So many authors start a great story and leave it. This is the way you would expect Kagome to go back home. Well, im glad I read your story it is fantastic!

that deserves a standing ovation... will there be a sequel??? i wanna know how sesshie is in kagome's real time... please

that was (pardon my French) FUCKING HARD!!!! I especially love the ending and the parting sentence about endings making way for tentative beginnings. As I am a hentai at heart i would have loved to have read more happening between the two, but your plot arrangement and well scripted lines made up for the lack of smut. Really made up for it.

I don't quite know whether to cry or to be relieved. The story was really, really good, Inu Yasha is... well, we'll leave that unsaid. it was a bit sad that kagome was so... apathetic when she lost her friends and was thrown back into her time.
but i'm glad that your story had a happy end - kind of ;)

That was the best ending ever; the perfect ending to this wonderful story. Bittersweet, yet very hopeful. I loved it. Thank you.

love the story so far!!! I think the plot is very well thought out and it is coming together nicely. I would like to put a small suggestion in to maybe inspire your wonderful muse... when kagome finally remembers her past can you make the scene in front of the god tree (you know the one Inuyasha was pinned to). Have her brush her fingers over the hole where the arrow was and then her memories come to her in flashes, almost as if the god tree was "telling" her about her past. Some of the flashes could be Inuyasha's smile, a rare moment of affection...lol how she would sit him for all kinds of things, you know stuff like that. If you already know what your going to do don't worry about it, it was just an idea I had, I thought it would be nice for her to fully remember him by touching the tree he was pinned to for so long and of course it was the very first place she saw him. Well let me know what you think. e-mail me at hellspixie18 @ yahoo . com

That has got to be one of the best endings i have ever read. Its hard to believe a fanfic almost made me cry; only a few have been able to do that. Hell most books cant to that. I cant wait for your next story!!! You should try doing some original stories I bet they'd be great.

:~D

*wipes at tears streaming down cheeks*

Wow. What an ending. Or would it be a new beginning? Either way it is one hell of a story!

I can't wait to read your next one! Could you please put me on that mailing list?

Until we meet again.

That was a great story. I was hoping for alil more in the end. I hope to see more or something. I really liked the story line and how you made it seem different then all the other stories... I'll be looking for more or another story. :D

Nikki

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