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September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is SO GOOD! I love your writing style. You've got a lot of talent. You have set this up so well. I really like the way the 1st chapter gave Kagome's thoughts and the next one lets us in on Sesshoumaru's. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think you're doing an excellent job of keeping everyone in character.
Very interesting story, can't wait to see more. :)
Very interesting story, can't wait to see more. :)
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September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm really glad to hear that you will update so often. I think adding the last few sentences from the previous chapter to the new one is a good idea. That way it helps you remember where we left off. Great job.
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start to a story. Update soon. Can't wait to read how Kagome recieved her injuries and why she is with Sesshomaru, where the rest of the Inu gang is, and their reactions if they are still alive.
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very Nice!!!! I love how you introduce the story and I am sad that there aren't anymore chapters to read at the moment. Please, please, plese update soon. I really enjoyed this chapter!
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's a very nice start. I can't wait to find out what happened, and see where this story goes. Please update again.
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh. This is sure interesting. Its well written and it gets the reader aching for more.
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A very promising start! I like your 'plot frst, smut later' attitude a lot. Wish there were more of you out there. I hope to see more soon!