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Hot damn! What a story! This is amazing! I can hardly wait for the next chapter to come out!

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Until we meet again.

Awesome!! I can't believe she nocked-out sesshoumaru! Great ending!!

WooooW!!! I mean reall wow!!

It such a wonderful story!! I just love your promise of lemons, but girl, you're really good! The plot is really fascinating!! The way how you describe every single movement or the way "he" looks at her...that so beautiful!! You really have talent!! Oh, and I simply LOVE how the plot moves on slowly, alright relatively "slowly", (if you get my hint.. :P). And it's soooooooooooo sweet how you picture Rin...!!! CUUUUTTTIIIEEE!!!!

REALLY; REALLY WELL DONE!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!

PlEASE UPDATE SOON!!! ( VERY SOON!!!! GRRRR)

THis is a very interesting story and quite unique. I like it when I read a story and it is so consumming that I don't feel like I am reading it but experiencing it. I don't know how many stories you have written but you have entered into this one like a pro. You have captured, most excellently, Sesshomaru and all of his complexities. I hold my breath every time Kagome opens her mouth and lets him know what she REALLY thinks. You have got them down pat.

You also set up a sexual tension that almost has a life of its own, very compelling stuff. I really like the way the story is unfolding and the suspense, the whole story flows. My email is pegasus4@bellsouth.net, if you have the chance please let me know when you update this most excellent story.

Til next time, Deb.

i felt her confusion, her sorrow; even if she doesn't remember, her nature is compassionate and intrinsic selfless so, for someone to sacrifice himself for the love of her- she would feel gut wrenching sorrow and guilt, any attempts to comfort her would be met with resistance even violent resistance/rage.

the goal of a true artist is to elicit emotion from those who view their work, in this; you have succeeded.

i will send you an e-mail requesting notification of your updates, thank you for offering.

sincerely,
ginny

this is a really good, i wonder how it will all play out, ill be waiting for the next chap. and the lemon....UPDATE SOON!please

Oooh, I can't wait to see what is going through that pretty head of his, though I doubt he'll be too pleased by that last bit. Ha!

Great job and looking forward to your next update.

-RhiannonoftheMoon

This is an awesome fic and I see a lot of potential in it and I mean a lot. At first I overlooked it cause the losing your memory bit is so cliche but boy did I ever eat my words. It may be a cliche idea but it's so tastefully and artfully executed that it doesn't feel like one at all. Sesshoumaru's character is just perfect and so eerily like his character from the actual manga/anime that it just baffles me sometimes. True, he may be a little warmer and *cough*alittlemorelustyaka.TheIncident*cough*, not that I complain mind you. It's nice to know that the Lord has a mmm-mmm-yummy side to him. After all most of us come here to adultfanfiction.net just for those kind of stories. And I adore how Kagome still retains the core parts of her personality, her loving kindess and fiesty temper. Her temper often gives rise to humourous aspects in an otherwise serious situation which I love. Can't have a story too serious it sucks out all the entertainment value and I'm a person who loves the funnies more than the angst. The fact that she's not all powerful is a nice touch. I frankly have a hard time holding my sceptism for a story that has her all powerful like superwoman. It just doesn't suit her personality. If she isn't all powerful that's fine, she more than makes up for it in other places. What I most love is reading the inner workings of Sesshoumaru and Kagome. It gives a really good insight to the story and it matches the tone of the story. That flash of green eyes from Rin. One can follow the progress of thoughts and actions of a character and how their feelings *squeal* develop. I'm a romantic at heart. A nice subtle reference to Shippou. She's not angsting over her lost memeories and rallying admirably but moments like those reminds a reader that she is missing something. "No, oh kami, no, she thought to herself. First there was the Incident, then the amusement in his eyes, then the whole flower issue, and now this. He wasn’t going to let her go. He wasn’t going to ever let her go. Sesshoumaru gazed at her with his contented eyes and almost, almost smiled." The ending to the chapter was just superb. I tingled with the after affects of that ending for a long while. And you know it's a good ending when... Then I thought, oh Kagome dear, I hope he doesn't. *smirk* I'll be reading and lurking!