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this is a really getting good, i wonder if kagome will remember everything, like after they get it on... ..UPDATE SOON! >>>Please

What an amazing chapter. There was little to no dialogue, and yet, so much comunication!

I am soo loving this story! I can't wait for the next chapter to come out!

Until we meet again.

ooo this is good! man i feel sorry for Kagome but i love the attraction btween her and sess! keep it up!

Wonderful! Your story is very addicting and I like the qualities you've given the characters. You've done a beautiful job developing them, and I'm very impressed.

I'm awaiting your next update! Please add me to your update list!

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ohhh she gets it and i got it to at the end of the chpater, iloved that the subtle way u have in ur fic and i'm really enjoying it as well. Keep up the great work, havent seen a decent fic in a while.

Great chapter! I love the way you're writing this story.

My my... having no memory surely gives Kagome enough free time to fully study Sesshoumaru... *contented grin* I mean, only an amnesic Kagome with loads of time to spare would give Naraku such a sporadic, passing thought as "once we take care of that fellow", like he was an everyday chore or something. *amused grin*

And the bit about bumping into a girl with her same face on the street... was that an indirect reference to Kikyo? Is she gonna show up in this fic?

I think you are doing a great job, especially for a first fanfic. The little bit like the microscope are a good touch

This may be stupid to bother fixing it, but I MEANT to write "the little bits you put in, such as the microscope thought, are a good touch."

THis was a surprise. I loved all the mental sleuthing Kagome was doing, figuring out at least most of his little plot. The fact that she has kept all of her sweetness, caring and fire helps her do this, instinctively.

I can understand why she sent Sesshomaru into oblivion, sometimes you are so mad that no amount of comforting will help and all you do is get madder. Finding out that someone gave their life for you, whether you remeber them or not, is a terrible burden on your soul and I cried when she saw the truth in his eyes. I love it when the muse takes things into her own hands. Then I feel you are along for the ride as well.

This is so well written and presented so cleverly that you have quickly become one of my favorite authors. Til next time, Deb. Oh, and if you need my email again it is - pegasus4@bellsouth.net. I don's want to miss a chapter.