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by Crescentgray

person Jay FicLover
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You've got it bad, Sesshou...

Hehe, Sesshoumaru's view on Izayoi was most funny. He accepts her as one of the only humans deserving of his attention, yet compares her to the tragic damsel in distress that lost her knight in shinning armor and wastes the rest of her life away crying her eyes out. At least she had Inuyasha to keep going... Kagome doesn't even remember him! What will you do, Sess, if Kagome ever remembers? What will you do about Kagome's irrational obsession with jumping in dry wells?
person localsamurai
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. You bring a greater understanding to both characters. Update soon.
person mel
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The inner workings of Sesshoumaru's mind. You really did a great job describing his logical and manipulative reasonings. I can't wait to read the next chaper. Please keep going.
person Malencia
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story is really good. I like that you stay close to their characters yet give sess kind of a soft side. Thanks for writing it and please write again soon!
person Kogasangel
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love this fic. It is very entertaining and keeps me in suspense. I keep looking for a new chapter and when it comes, it is the first thing I read. So, that being said, please add another chapter soon.
person RhiannonoftheMoon
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved how you played out Sesshomaru's though process - superbly done. In know that this fic is going to have all sorts of interesting surprises waiting for us! I have to wonder if Naraku is going to meddle, and if Sesshomaru plans to start his family before he is defeated. What were the fates of Miroku and Shippo? Was Kagome really Yasha's mate or was that Sesshomaru's assumption? And I'm not going to ask you to answer any of them - I will simply wait for the next chapter.
person Sweetcakes
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is so in keeping with Maru's (can't spell the damn thing) character. Poor Kagome...I wonder if you'll let her get her memory back. I can't wait for the next chapter!
person blue_saiyan_angel
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. I've been looking for a new story line. Do you plan on having Kagome regain her memory but keep it from Sesshoumaru?
person Dionysos
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i hope the next chapter comes up quick cuz this chapter was all sees thinking and "planing" as crafty as it was, i can't wait to see what he says to kagome,please post the next chapter up soon
person Itachi
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I especially enjoyed the part where Sesshoumaru was contemplating what technique to on using to "woo" Kagome to him.

Hilarious.

Please update soon; and I was wondering if you posted your works, such as "Blank", on "A Single Spark" (www.a-single-spark.com)? This is such an awesome Sesshoumaru/Kagome story and I think you'd gain more regconition if you were to post on that site.

Oh well, just a suggestion.

Update soon.

Ja ne.