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by Crescentgray

person Mara
schedule December 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am no where near articulate enough to give this the review it deserves, so I just have to say that it was an incredible story that had me tearing up by the end! Normally I would feel cheated without an ending that wraps every issue up nicely, but I just can't with this story.
person Auraki
schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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person pcpalomo
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved the story but wasn't so keen on the ending though. still so many unanswered uestions left. but ur writing abilaty is phenomenal. mine on the other hand is kacking so i say bravo to u
person Sai
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG you are such amazing writer!!!!!!!!i love this story so much. especially the last few sentences, they really meant things.WOW WOW WOW so beautiful!!!! i cant stop saying how beautiful this is. i almost cried. soooooooo good!!!
person Blair
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dear god that was amazing. Probably one of the best cannons i have ever read. Your so talented in so many areas. The flow was soo wonderful i didn't skip a single word. Your character portrayl was perfect and well thoughtout and your description and style was beautiful and strong Great job.
person Tenno-chan
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
XD Excellent story!! Splendidly written and ended nicely. :) I can honestly say I was upset there was no lemon, and then I quickly thought on it, and realized that it would not have ended with the same feeling about it. So it's all good. :) Also, the epilogue was almost poetic. :D Kudos!!!!
person roseying
schedule May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was lovely. Thank you. It sounds like there is sequel potential here...
person clavira
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i think i didn't leave a review yet, so just to be sure, i'm doing it now.

WOW! absolutely loved it. it was a very good ending, conclusive yet open ended. i was great the way sesshoumaru waited until she was ready, though it was really sad that inu yasha went with Kikyo (what a bitch...)
anyway, hopefully you'll keep writing (fan)fiction, 'cause you're really good at it (i envy you....)!
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was such a good story! please write more stories like it. the only other thing i would have liked is for the epilouge to have continued a bit more, did sesshomaru raise shippo and is he alive in the present as well?
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story, once I started I couldn't stop ^_^ Thank you for the nice read.