rate_review Reviews

i loved reading up to 7 i had to read all of them before i could write a review. :P im just so happy that its still going on though i thought it would ebd at seven. which would have been a major bummer. keep writing your doing a very very very excellent job. ^_^

I am really enjoying reading your story!! Very well written!! Can't wait for the update, hope it's soon!!!

awwe please finish!!!

I wanted to clue you in on something though.... It's not Ren it's Rin... and you have a TON of verbal and tense confusion going on in this hun... i love the idea though, i found myself wanting to hear more than you had written....

Just thought I'd let ya know. ^_^

I like the premise behind the story a lot. Sometimes the flow of words seems better than others...maybe the parts you really enjoy the most, eh? The description of kagome when Inuyasha sees her in the lake, describing her as iridescent, was very nice and evocative. One thing that struck me was when kagome is wondering about why Inuyasha didn't turn into a demon years before if he really wanted to do so. her eventual 'oh well, just can't figure this out,' just didn't work for me. I kept thinking...would she really do that? She's not stupid, wouldn't she be working on the problem? That sort of thing.
Anyway, look forward to the next chapter

What a great chapter 7. Kagome just walked in at the wrong time. Inuyasha better say and do the right thing.

awesome. I love it. Its sad yet happy and oh i wanna read more update soon. Good works

Love your story hey for a newbie your doing pretty good don't worry your doing just fine if you ever need help with something E-mail me and I'll see how I can help you with.

i love it. update soon!