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October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
write more asap.
i am really enjoying this piece.
i am really enjoying this piece.
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely LOVE this story!! its so great and i love the ...what can i call it? romantic tension? between inuyasha and kagome. i cant wait for something happen! what a way to lead to a peaked climax! just incase you didnt notice...this is one of my favorite stories.
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. You can just feel the sadness.
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it! And i was kinda of wondering when they'd confess 2 each other and go at it...but that's ur choice. so keep up the good work!
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awsome...plzzz update soon...^.^
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh! That is such a sweet story. I can't wait to read more of it. It's just so sad that he is messing up a miraculous second chance the way he is. Keep working on it. The story is excellent.
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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWWE i really hope he wises up and she stops listening to her guilty concious.
they belong <3 together.
they belong <3 together.
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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah, and you still have some errors that you need to correct such as using You're instead of your. look at it this way to remember what form to use... if you cannot say you are then it's your if you can, and it sounds right then use you're. That's just a little easy way to remember without knowing all the rules.
You also are still using improper tenses... example... "Haven't you been listening to what I said six years ago?" should be HADN'T you been listening to what I said six years ago."
keep up the chappies though, i can't wait for more.
You also are still using improper tenses... example... "Haven't you been listening to what I said six years ago?" should be HADN'T you been listening to what I said six years ago."
keep up the chappies though, i can't wait for more.
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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Update!! I just love this story!!! Can't wait for the next chapters!!
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you decided to post on Aff. Welcome. I do love this story, and hope to see the rest of your story up soon. Hint, hint and hopefully a new chapter.
Chanda
Chanda