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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! that is THE most fantastic fanfiction! Most of the fanfics on this site R just porn. With a story like that you should do another copy of it on www.fanfiction.net. there it would get waaay more hits! hurry up! I wanna know what happens to Kagome afterwards and how Inuyasha apologizes. What about Kikyou? It would B soo cool if at the moment that Inuyasha & Kagome made up Kikyou walks up! I totally hate that bitch Kikyou! GO! GO!GO! GO! GO!
U R sooooooo fab!
Coke *^_^*
(P.S. R u a guy or girl? What age?)
U R sooooooo fab!
Coke *^_^*
(P.S. R u a guy or girl? What age?)
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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what the... lol i can't believe he left her there!!!!!!
you have some spelling errors... such as poor instead of pour.
but whatever it was still good and it wasn't hella illiterate so i'm still reading. ^_^ yeah, crazy, i would have thought he would hold her or something... not just leave her bleeding and cold in the rain on the top of a cliff!
but at least they are now mates ... update soon.
you have some spelling errors... such as poor instead of pour.
but whatever it was still good and it wasn't hella illiterate so i'm still reading. ^_^ yeah, crazy, i would have thought he would hold her or something... not just leave her bleeding and cold in the rain on the top of a cliff!
but at least they are now mates ... update soon.
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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz keep going with the story im going insane not being able to continue the story although that was not the way i would have imagined it im sure you will keep the story flowing and entertaining so plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue i sure do hope inuyasha can fix things oh well im sure he will loved the story so plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue
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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was a wonderful lemon, absolutely hot and well-written! And there is this bit of angst that mixes nicely with the story... yes, I liked it, you did a great job with this story and especially this chapter!
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another well executed chapter!!!!! It literally took my breath away! Bravo! Take all the time you need to write more because when you write stuff that is this good it shouldn't be rushed and you totally understand that!!! Thank you for putting so much hard work into your chapters. This story is beautiful and heart wrenching at the same time!!!! 3 cheers for you!!!!
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14 -- Yes your writing paid off. I really felt that chapter. Had me worried, crying and loving. Thanks
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love it, it is a great story. you made the jealousy and pent up passion extremely belivable. i love how you create a softer side to the grown up inuyasha but he still retains the essentails of inuyasha(jealous,unforgivving to himself,and "mean" which underlies kindness and compassion for kagome) im guessing this story is all about miscomunication... haha... basically i cant wait until the next chapter is up.
twilight kiss
twilight kiss
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz write more im dieing
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awsome ^^ Its really good, update soon.......thanks
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am absolutely in LOVE with this story! Your writing techniques are amazing, and I envy your work! I can't wait until the next chapter comes up! Keep up the amazing work!