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for Two Worlds One Love (Complete)

by Fairytalechic1

person InuYoukai
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
“If you love something, set it free. If it comes back to you, it’s yours forever.”

Inuyasha knew that in this case it fit perfectly . . . he loved Kagome, he was going to set her free . . . only, in their case, he wasn’t going to let her come back to him.

---What is going to do... Is he being selfish again???
person rakanasama
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
T.T it took so long to update i was going through withdrawl! Please keep going it's really really good!

(don't make Inuyasha and Kagome split up again have him like go with her or have her come back or have him stay in her time i dunno i don't care just something where they're together!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Inuyasha knew that in this case it fit perfectly . . . he loved Kagome, he was going to set her free . . . only, in their case, he wasn’t going to let her come back to him."

WHAT

ugh.. he's a fucking idiot.
person InuYoukai
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 16 -- Another wonderful written chapter.
person InuYoukai
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15 -- That was so nice, lovely and sweet. Loved it all. Thanks.
person InuGoddess715
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. The lemon was sexy and sweet. But those two have to TALK to each other before things are settled. It's so clear that they love each other, but there are too many uncertainties on both sides for their happiness to last if they don't talk frankly with each other. I look forward tot he update.
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's cute! lol, I did notice some errors in type but... Like you said, you did not edit and it WAS like five am. Believe me I know exactly what that is like.

I hope that you'll make this twenty instead of 18. The most you can get the better.

Thanks.

I will continue to read every update.
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PS

not to sound all dumb and conceided as well as self promoting but... Please read some of my stories... they don't get nearly enough readers.

ARIGATOU Domo.

H.
person TapTheMemoryBank
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok...I listened to the song with the story and it actually made me cry! It made the chapter so surreal and beautiful. It was just so sweet the way they made love....and uh! It was beautiful that's all I can say. Another chapter well written. Your style is beautiful and creative. I can't wait to see what's next. Job well done! :)

P.S. The song was so perfect!!!! It's like it was made for them!
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles* Now I need some Kleenex. . . .
That was a great chapter, it was so beautiful! You articulated it very well!!