rate_review Reviews

Well i made it all the way to chapter 14. You had a good story sorta. But then you have Inuyasha rape Kagome which pisses me off more ten anything. How can you say that they love each other then have him rape her? Then make it seemed like it was a good thing? He forcefully made her submit then raped her and ran a away. After 13 chapters of utter bull shit that they cant tell each other how they feel. After 6 years not one can say thier true feelings. You had a good idea but you made it seem like they hated each other and hid behind false love. even in the manga Inuyasha never would have hurt Kagome. I believe you have talent and you can be a great writer but this story just seems wrong thier is no love between them. Atleast not the way your writeing it. Keep writing dont let me stop you.

~~Sieg

Ok now i have just finished the whole story. I still believe that Inuyasha is to OOC. He made him self human for her and now he cant protect her or his kids. That should never have happened. But is was a happy ending to a good story. Just one thing wouldn't it have been easy to tell Kagome how he felt instead of becoming a half-human?
But like i said good story but my previous rant stays true.

~~Sieg

the last two chapters made me cry :D

Gaaah that idiot! Just abadoning people like that,
I don't think Kagome comes with a receipt or something
the idiot!! lol
Great story btw
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I didn't forget.

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you should do a sequel

I really like this story, and I can't wait to see how it works out. I can't wait for the next chapter!

I really dig this story. Hopr you finish it soon!

OMG you need to post the next chapter like, right now. I'm serious! I'm on the verge of trears, I love your story!

OMG I love your story, you have no idea. I don't care if you have grammatical errors or not, I can still read it ^.^

PLEASE finish the next chapter, you're killing me with this cliff-hanger of yours!

hey i just wanted to say that your story is so good, so far from all the others i read yours is the best what can i say, you have talent. keep it up oh by the way are you going to separate inuyasha and kagome? well is not my story but i think that they suffered enough... and well just let them be happy... just one opinion but if not them good job...and this grandpa thing, great....it came out of no where..unexpected..nice well you know im just saying... about inuyasha (again) why is he going to do that? i mean "set her free...but in this...he won't let her come back"? that right there got me...but it was cool because i kinda knew you where going to that because of the part where kagome tells shippou about it...yeah i knew that inuyasha was listening....omg..sorry i think i wrote 2 much and it's only suppose to be a review...it's just that your story really got to me ..you know well that's all one of your fans...inusgirl ;)