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for Seperated Soul

by Rebeldedm

schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow ppl I didn't think you'll like this story this much just wait for the next chapter ^-^ And thanks for the reviews by the way totally awesome <3 <3 Kikyo18/Kagome18 <3 <3
person Sorceress
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it you must go on, Inuyasha is far too much of a baby to have anyone, and I think that Kagome would be better off with Sesshoumaru. Because it is one of my fav pairing Sesshoumaru and kagome and Seeshoumaru and Rin. :) Keep it up
person kinkyneko33
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story. inuyasha is such a dick in this story! update soon!
person Stephanie
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THIS STORY IS GETTING GOOD!KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!AND LEX IS GOING OFF THE CHAIN WITH IAN DONT U THINK GOIN WITH SOME OTHER BOY TO MAKE HIM JEL!SHES TURNING INTO MYKEY!
person raven28
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love it please updite soon
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lol thanks everyone you ppl leave great reviews I'm glad you liked my story ha ha ha major twist with the faked death lol. Well when we get deeper into the next chapter you'll find out what Inuyasha's job is so every1 ttyl g2g to school lol.
person amberlin
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the concept of your story, but the grammar needs help and the spelling to. Maybe make the chapters a little longer and did you even write that Kagome new that Inuyasha was coming to stay? How did she know? Some more detail would be good. Other than that it’s a good story line.
person Inari
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More, more, more. I love the way you wrote this. Kagome kicks ass. Please update soon.
person kawaii-miko
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wats inu gonna think about the new kag
wouldn't he know by her scent
wow sess sounds likes hes loded and inu
wat do they do for a living
the car sounds way hot i want it no fair
update soon
haha inuyasha
person angel
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow .... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would lvoe to read more ... later for now

angel