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for Seperated Soul

by Rebeldedm

person kinkyneko33
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg, inuyasha is such a dick!!! i hope he gets his dick chopped off!!! *ok, no more watching teen aqua hunger force....* update soon! i love this story!
person lala_land
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was really mean of Inuyasha but sesshomaru is there to rescue her
person jordan
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
uuuuh... y duz kags have a corpse!?!?!?
person ASHLEY
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay sweety... this story is great, just like the rest of your stories. I love it. Now all you have to remember is you need to read what you write and fix the mistakes in the story. You have a couple of mistakes in this story. That's all that is wrong with it really. Over all it's really really good and I hope you update sometime soon. Just go back and fix the mistakes sweety. I love you. So update soon girly.
person Sorceress
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!!!!! That was soooo hot, and Inuyasha heard them hehehe too bad he doesn't know its Kagome that way she could say OH GOD SEESHOUMARU YOUR'RE WAY BETTER THEN INUYASHA :)P hehehe that would be HOT!!!!!!
person Yashie
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aw! I want to see more come on continue this story you left it at a cliff hanger!


person Sorceress
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sesshoumaru comes home to see Kagome cries, his eyes windened knowing what he did. I'm going to kill that little fucker. :) I know if I was him I would the asshole didn't want her, he is just mad at something that Sesshoumaru has over him, and it pissed him off.
person kinkyneko33
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg, KIKYO GOT OWNED!!! i love this story, and things are heating up between kagoma and sesshomaru, i LOVE it. update soon!
person Kero
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story has got to be one of the most creative stories I have come across yet. I love your stories. Especially “Kagome’s Diary” you have a real talent for writing and I look forward to your next story and updates.

I haven’t seen talent like you’re in a long time. Moreover, I do particularly like to say that I have favorite authors. However, in your case I HAVE to make an exception. I am enjoying reading all of your stories. Even though I don’t review on all of them, I still love to read them.

Continue on with your ideas; never EVER let anyone tell you you’re not a good writing. ‘Cuz they lying!

Anyways, I have to go. I look forward to more of your stories in the future. You portray your character very well and I can’t believe you of all people read MY story. So, see you around…

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person lala_land
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was so cute keep going.