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for Seperated Soul

by Rebeldedm

person lala_land
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
is it posssible to hav different dads for twins???? anyhow nice story!!!
person :( Dan's girl
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE. NOW. OR. ELSE. DO. YOU. UNDERSTAND. ME? HAHA GIRLY IM KIDING BUT HEY PLEASE UPDATE... DAN'S STILL NOT HOME AND I MISS HIM SOOOOOOO MUCH. -SNIFFLES-
person Yashie
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good Lordy! i can't wait to see what you write next i pray to the gods both of the kids are sesshoumaru's id hate to see the fic turn into a inu/kag story i love the idea of sesshoumaru and kagome together! wow two little babies? I know the boy is Sesshoumaru Jr but what bout the girl Hmm stupid idea but maybe Yashie ::laughs::im kidding im kidding. im loving this story and if you think bout it Both kids would have Little ears like inuyasha since they are half breeds::twitches:: but i love the story none the less::prays sesshy doesnt leave kagome:: well i loved it! your wicked awesome!


Signed Yashie
P.s. if you decide to use the name Yashie THAT WOULD BE AWESOME!
person Dan's Girl 4 Life
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was actually really kinda sad. It was good though and I hope you update soon. So you going to tell all us crazy people if one of those kids is Inuyasha's???? That would just be the icing on the cake now wouldn't it. Hahahaha... I wonder what Sess would do if that was the case... he's bound to realise somethings up ya know. Well talk to ya laters. ^_^
person Dan's Girl 4 Life
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DAN'S COMING HOME TONIGHT!!!!!!!!! YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY!!!!! I'M SO HAPPY RIGHT NOW.... I'M LIKE TOTALLY JUMPIN UP AND DOWN RIGHT NOW.... I JUST HAD TO SAY THAT LOL. UPDATE SOON GIRLY.
person selina
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow....that was really good!!!
person lala_land
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
is it even possible to have different dads in twins? ohh well its your story keep it up its good!!
person Amara_21
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story... but i have one little thing to ask.... please finish it... ^-^ I love it though I do...
person STEPHANIE
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LUV IT!ADD MORE!
person Guess Who...
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well let's see you silly goose. I love the story, so keep it up. Update soon though cuz I wanna know what happens. Don't let anyone get you down cuz they are just haters. So talk to you later love... take care. :)