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for Seperated Soul

by Rebeldedm

person caliha
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
uhh the first chapter weirded me out from even going to the second. why in the world would she have a corpse that looks like herself in her basement???? and a rotten one at that? i suppose this is a kikyo reference, but it makes no sense and its really _really_ disturbing
person Little Jack 2
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Inuyasha sounds insane eh?,well whatever can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
We think too much alike girly. lol. It's really really good. I wonder what will happen next.
person lala_land
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was very ooc But its a good story I love it!!
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
one heck of a place to leave it at sweetie, but its so kool. well gotta go so have fun doing what you do.
person Inu_Twins
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I luved the ending it was so sad -.- I hate sad endings and I want a sequeal! I hope Kags, Sessh, and their kids will b ok !
person selina
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
come on!!

write more more more!!!
i can't wait.....
person lala_land
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
weird but cool plesse keep going!!!
person Yashie
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL thats cool. Yashie is a girls name lol. but cool cool and couldn't the tests be wrongs or tampered with because if i remember right didnt sango call inuyasha all husky like as if she was h*rny lol. so couldn't they both turn out to be Sesshoumaru's and i hope he isn't going to leave her!
person Inu_Twins
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg I luv it! Plz update soon b/c this is awesome! Poor Kagome I want 2 kill InuYasha!