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for A Slip Of The Tongue

by ryukotsusei

schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story.
person Karren
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, that was hot. Sex in the tub I like it. Things worked out in the end for her, so it's all good. I liked this one. Keep up the excellent work.
person ZeldaFitz
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm one of those lazy readers you were ranting about on MySpace, so I decided to make the leap and leave you a review, even if it does cut into my "sitting around" time. I like all your stuff -- always have. Crossover, YYH or Yaoi, it's all great. I especially appreciate the length of your chapters. There's nothing more frustrating to me than to wait months for an update only to get one or two measly paragraphs. Sometimes the subject matter gets a bit dark for me, but I'm always drawn into the story anyway. Your artwork has improved a lot in the last year, as well. Gotta love Hiei. This fic was good, as usual. Hiei and Kagome just seem to fit together, although I like almost any pairing. I'll always be here reading and I will honestly try to leave a review now and then. Really.
person Ox King
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm a big Hiei and Kagome crossover pairing. Thanks for taking the time to write. I enjoyed reading your story.
person Chi-Ame
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Have i ever told u how much i love u? I can never get over ur stories. They're like a drug 2 me. I can never stop reading ur stories. I love u! >.<(i think dats so wried when ppl say dat n they dont even kno u) but dats how much i LOVE these stories of ur's. Damn i need sum big help 4 da head. Time 4 da white coats. -.-; thax 4 da new story, it was just wut i needed 2 start a new shity week of school. Keep up da great work! ^.~
person Chi-Ame
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Have i ever told u how much i love u? I can never get over ur stories. They're like a drug 2 me. I can never stop reading ur stories. I love u! >.<(i think dats so wried when ppl say dat n they dont even kno u) but dats how much i LOVE these stories of ur's. Damn i need sum big help 4 da head. Time 4 da white coats. -.-; thax 4 da new story, it was just wut i needed 2 start a new shity week of school. Keep up da great work! ^.~
person Chi-Ame
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Have i ever told u how much i love u? I can never get over ur stories. They're like a drug 2 me. I can never stop reading ur stories. I love u! >.<(i think dats so wried when ppl say dat n they dont even kno u) but dats how much i LOVE these stories of ur's. Damn i need sum big help 4 da head. Time 4 da white coats. -.-; thax 4 da new story, it was just wut i needed 2 start a new shity week of school. Keep up da great work! ^.~
person kimisan
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome and I actually felt sorry for her. Had to be fucking embarrassing to say the least. She should slap Yusuke in his head for that one. He's a sexy toushin but he really does have a mouth on him. Not to mention nosey females don't help. Sex in the tub is always nice. Thinking of that Aoshi has just grabbed a towel, think that's a hint. *Winks* Keep up the good work. *Hands you chocolate Kazuki cookies*
person Takhisiss (nsi)
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL, Oh the embarrassment. And people thought I was bad. LOL, I love it, you have a wicked sense of humor and it is nice to see it so expressed. Maybe one of the best slips Kags ever made. LOL. well done.
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please continue your doing great!