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Oh My. That was incredible. I can't believe that happened. So the Jewel is powerful again and is loose in the Makai. Oh the troubles that will develop. Poor Kagome. She always seems to get the really sharp end of the stick. Perhaps she can find peace, but if I read the story right, she is now a part of the jewel, just like Midoriko. I'm definitely intrigued by the different paths this story could take.

I get the feeling all hell is about to break loose now. With Kagome being forcibly yanked out of the jewel it makes you wonder what condition her body will be in after being gutted like a fish in the first chapter and what sort of connection she'll still have with the jewel assuming they can get it away from ugly. Good chapter, update soon please.

I know this was a great long chapter, but you are still evil to end it there. It makes sense that Hiei's friends would want him to stop living in a fantasy world.

I absolutely loved this. Not often you see someone have the balls to kill off a main character. I'm sure you have something planned. Who the fuck gave it 2 star rating. What the fuck is wrong with some people. It has great detail and insight, plus a plot. Probably some fucking Kagome lover that got pissed you killed her off. People like that piss me off. You gave a warning, they shouldn't read it. People die, fact of life! Life isn't all fluff, get a clue whomever did it. The story has great potential, just like everything she writes. I'm all for the Hiei angst, bring it on. People with no backbone stay on the couch. Keep up the goodwork, I can't wait to find out what happened to the jewel.

that was awesome lol u killed her hardly ever done kudos to u please update

That was truly painful. Great job on the angst!