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for Stalking The Elusive Heart

by kimisan

person german_nemesis
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great, cool, interesting, captivating and sexy as hell. Please do continue!!
person Lady Shikon
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great story on your part. I really like this story as well ^^ And its pretty funny reading about the cold wolf of Mibu, loose it over Kagome(a.k.a Kitten)the way he did. It was very sweet and romantic in a way, all at the same time. But who was she dating? The guy that was with the weapons thing or whatever? Is he from, like, the series??
person Ox King
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, this first chapter was so good. I'd never thought of Kagome and Saitou as a pair. You made it work. Congrats. The lemons were really well writen. I love the plot. Thanks for taking the time to write. New chapter soon.
person Beggar
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really hot too. This is one of my favorites among your stories. This and A Promise To The Betrayed.
person Gothic Lust
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice, first time i read such a pairing and i have to say not bad. Though i do perfer the more famous kagome/kenshin this has got my interest piqued and it not only because of the hot sex!

I love it. please update soon. and please email me to let me know when you do! thanks
--Gothic Lust
person Subtext
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've read this at least fifty times already, no joke, and it never fails to pull my emotions and loins each time. The Kagome/Saitou love scenes never fail to make me cream my pants. Will you write a second chapter anytime soon?
person Diane
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hope you update soon, I've already reread chapter 1 at least 4 times & I really like it & can't wait to see what happens next.
person Panda-chan
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Will Saitou catch her next chapter? I hope so! Poor Saitou=san.
person Xaxy
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it!!! ...Saito "drools"...eh?! Anyway I hope you keep going with this story and up date soon. I can't wait!!! <<33
person Elli Mac
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Like always I love your fanfic. you are so telnted that i hope you'll update soon. I have never rad or ever heard of this pairing before and i say you made it one of my favorite's. Your so loved. And please! update soon i want Saito to found out that Kagome can kick some serious ass. anyway love ya.