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damn girl, you have a brilliant, inventive imagination! i love reading your work and this is SUCH a great story. i can't wait to read the next chapter. i don't have a great deal of experience with all the different animes and i don't know which one the two male characters come from. could you enlighten me? looking forward to more fun, laughter and heat too hot for paper!

Please please send me an email when you update this. That last chapter had me laughing really hard.

good story please update soon.

I love this fic !! And I love the pairing. Too bad Saitou had a wife >_<
Please udapte soon

I Wish you would update this fic soon!
It's awesome!
Keep up the great work and update soon!
You little Kinkster, you...
Mika

OMG that was so good, the last ppart of chapter 2 had me laughing my butt off! Please tell me the girls are somehow found by the men.

Hey, this is a great story so far. I find your crossing-over of Rurouni Kenshin and Inuyasha to be very well done, unlike other stories in which I mourn for the loss of Inuyasha or Kagome spends her time all angsty. I mean, four hundred years passed, why should she be angsty? Right? Yeah. The only problem I have is that a lot of times I am unable to understand what is going on/who is thinking what because of the excessive use of pronouns as opposed to names. It's not difficult to understand when it's just one male and one female in a scene, but when it's Kagome and Misao and Kameko, I get confused. You'll say "she did this so she laughed while she frowned" and it would read easier as "Misao did this so Kagome laughed while Kameko frowned". This is, of course, a slight exaggerration, but there is a paragraph very similar to this in the beginning of the second chapter when Misao is poking her foot at the decaying corpse and Kagome is amused while Kameko is upset. It was just a little difficult to follow because they are all she's.

But it really is a good story so far. Please consider my suggestion.

UPDATE, I LOVE THIS STORY! WOOT WOOT!

I love it!!! Kagome sure kick ass in this fic, I hope you up date soon >.<

Your story is amazing and Very well written as well as thought out, I am definetly enjoying it and am on my knees begging for yet another chapter of such an enjoyable story