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for A Promise To The Betrayed

by kimisan

person babygirl
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good job i do hope that you update again soon. i can't wait o read more.
person bluemoon_175
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please you must write more, I have never been more excited to wait for an update. Plus this story is keeping me on my toes, I hope you keep up the job well done. Also this story sounds fantastic, so PLEASE UPDATE as SOON as you can.
person purp1ebabe
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hehe... this seems very interesting. i can't wait to hear more!
person madmiko
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the beginning! This is a very interesting set-up you have -- I really like the way you have set the stage for Kagome to become part of the Yu Yu gang. This is fun! More, please!
person molly
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow... can't wait to read the next one!
person Ryukotsusei
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn Yusuke has some crappy timing. On the other hand, the cat will soon be out of the bag and they'll be able to carry on in person. Excellent chapter, update soon please.
person Dyquem
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting so far. I hope she fesses up soon that she knows who he is, but also that she'll play with him a bit. "I don't know I've ever cared for green eyes."
person Kage Otome (NSI)
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So Kagome knows who he is, but when will he find out? How? When will they meet? Keep up the good work, I can't wait to read more!
person Anime sweetie
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter!! I can't wait to see what happens when they meet. But damn Yusuke couldn't wait a few more minutes to pick up the phone. However, I will say the mental image I get of Kurama chaseing Yusuke around their apartment with his rose whip in hand, does make me giggle. SO please update soon!! I can't wait to see what happens when they meet.
person purp1ebabe
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i can't wait til they meet. wut will kurama think when he finds out that kagome is keiko's roomie? can't wait til the next chap!