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for A Promise To The Betrayed

by kimisan

person Chi-ame
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love ur story n think if other dont like they can go fuck themselfs. -.- It is hard work 2 write a fic, even worse 2 do a desont 1 @ dat, if they think its so bad they should write 1 2 their liking. Ur story is awsome n i wont let anything they say get 2 u, they just wish they were as good as u *winks* I see nothing w/ ur grammer, god knos mines beyound help >.< , u do very good in updating. I know life gets in da way so shit happens, u kno. But i said it once n will say it again, i love ur story. My only reqest is if u can put more yoko in it. I love dat kinky fox, its hard not 2! *grin* keep up w/ da good work! *hugs u*
person devoted kimisan fan!
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thats my correct email address so if you do go off this site please send me the link to that address
person Katie
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What the hell!? HOW did you bastardize Kurama's/Shuichi's character? And why does your grammar need help? Goodness! I think whoever left that review needs to get their head checked! Your grammar is in the 96th percentile of fandom, truthfully. Your spelling takes a hit or two in a chapter, but it's nothing major. Your grammar? It's commendable. Especially given the fact that you don't have a beta.

Whoever left that review must be jealous that you write such imaginative and captivating stories. By insulting your grammar and spelling, s/he must be hoping to turn you off from fandom or from writing. Bah, whatever.

I hope you update when you can... and I understand how Karren feels. I agree with her too.
person Cherry Sakura
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry to hear about all your problems, just wanted to let you know that I am one of your devoted flames, I wouldn't flame your fics even if they were bad. Thank you for continuing with your work and if your busy with your own life its ok, im sure we *your fans* will wait patiently. ^^ Keep up the good work *AND THERES NOTHING WRONG WITH A FREAKY KURAMA HE IS A GUY YA KNOW lol* can't wait to read more


Chao
person anom
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story, keep up the good work!
person babygirl
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yeah i love it. I was great. I can't for more. I do hope it soon.
person purp1ebabe
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay sum kurkag action!! woah freaky... the person calling her is prob her prof eh?
person Cherry Sakura
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love this fic, love to read more! update soon
person izu
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you totally bastardize Kurama's character woman! What were you thinking?! And god grammar needs help ASAP!
person Karren
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Everything looks great so far! Though I'm not much on Kurama/Kagome but I'm enjoying it. And Izu can't kiss ass because how the fuck is Kurama being a bastard in this? What the fuck is wrong with some people. I've seen stupid assholes bitch that authors make him too mean, forgetting that he lived a thousand years as a murdering thief. His character is just fine. Someone obviously needs to get laid and not by their mother. I saw a few mistakes but it is nothing compared to some of the other things I have had the displeasure of seeing. You are doing a great job and you should ignore pricks like that. You have done nothing wrong with his character. Izu find something else to bitch about, like your obvious dissatified life.

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