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for A Promise To The Betrayed

by kimisan

person devoted kimisan fan!
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome hot chapter. although short really hot. who keeps calling. iwant to know. oh and will kagome tell jkurama of the teacher. i think she should...like on accident.. you know really mad and ranting and the oops she said what the teacher did. again really good chapeter.
person Katie
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yehey! The creepy stalker is giving me chills but Kurama-Kagome table smex made me happy! Yey for table smex! I hope Kurama protects Kagome from that creepy stalker... and I hope they have babies. I want to pet me some babies.
person babygirl
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. It was great. But i am still sitting at the edge of my seat wanting to know who is stalking her. Well keep up the great work. Hope to see some more soon. And remember i does not matter what others say. All that matters is that you enjoy what you write. And Fuck everyone eles. Do what you love to do.
Babygirl
person purp1ebabe
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
creepy... the guys is stalking her. thank god she got to kurama's safely! wooo another lemon yay!! lol keep up the good work!
person Shanalir
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really great new chapter. I hope you reveal soon who the breather is, and that he (or she) gets what's coming to them.
person Kage Otome (NSI)
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what Kurama's thoughts were? Hm...Keep up the good work! *grins* It seems Kagome made the first move this time ne? I can't wait for the next chapter!
person Diane
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying it & while the grammar & sometimes spelling is off here & there it is by no means as bad as some I've seen that got glowing reviews. Heck I usually only see maybe a half dozen possible corrections per chapter in your stuff & that's practically a miracle against some that have 2 dozen people saying how great they are when the grammar is WAY off & half the fic is junk. As far Kurama being OOC I don't really think he is, heck anything where these characters have sex is OOC since none of them do in the anime/manga of either series as far as I've seen. Ignore the flamers & continue on with whatever fic you feel like, although personally I'm hoping for a 2nd chapter of the IY/RK 1.
person Aria
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are my hero... ;o) Keep up the great work...I enjoy all of your stories, grammer and all! :o)
person Deb
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to thank you for your story. It's been a long time since I've found a fanfiction I felt that I could be emotionally attached to. The ones I've been skimming through as of late don't give me the connection with the characters that you seem to give. I rarely review, but reading your A/N made me want to.
I wanted to make sure, that I'm sure you know.. many people love your story, I love your story.
>< and You better not stop!

Please, do continue the good work.
Thank you.
person Tay
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think this is a great story those flamers should be eaten by the Simi. (Read Sherrilyn Kenyon)