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for To Give You Forever

by ryukotsusei

person ptbear
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Update soon assuming this is not a one-shot. Can't wait to read about Enmas' reaction thinking Kagome would not go through with the mating.
person melted cheese
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your fics always start so strong, so hot and just so damn fucking brilliant. My only wish is that you'd finish them.....
person Karren
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Despite the yaoi content, which I'm kind of blah about. It was very good! Just found me another author to check out on this site. There aren't many here that I consider read worthy. Most of them throw shit down that makes absolute sense. And it's a shame those are the ones that get the reviews. Now, for this I hope you continue and let us know what happens. Please keep up the good work. I'll be looking forward to more of your work.
person Amy
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to wright some more to this story
person Lady Kio-tye
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another work well done!!*__* I cant wait to see if more chapters will be added.
person molly
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please tel me this is going to continue! I am thouroghly enjoying it can't wait to see enma's and the other detective's reactions.
person Kogas Hentai Luver
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OHHHHHHH Great story. You gave me more Yusuke cock, you gave me more Yusuke cock, lalalalalala **doing a happy dance, scaring the crap out of my cats** That was really good. Is there going to be more? Or must we use our imaginations. ^_^ Either way, I'm completely satisfied with the threesome ^_~ Ha, I knew Koenma would find a way to save Hiei. Even though he comes off indiferent and uncaring a lot, he truly cares for his Reikai Team. He's a big softy. Of course, I would have loved to have seen Yusuke kick King Enma's ass. I don't think anyone has written that yet **taps finger on chin** But we all know that if Enma hadn't granted Kag's wish, he would have blasted the whole place down freeing his firebrat, LOL. And who wouldn't with Hiei nooky awaiting, hahahaha. Loved it, loved it, loved it! I'll email you later today, K.

Love and Kisses
KHL
person anom
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great story
person queen daa
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow this was a interesting pairing im not sure if ive seen a yusuke/hiei partnership its a very nice twist with kagome entering then picture tho lol nice work plz update soon
person kooky
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DAMN u sure got sum talent, ive amazed where do u find the ideas for such fantastic stories, theres always sum detailed plot going on then BAM a slick lemony lol its enthralling and addictive i eagerly await the next one. hugs + kisses