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I do believe I am allowed to give myself a review. I loved how I put this together and how everything just sorta flows together. This is a pair that I never thought in million years I would put together. I'm a die hard InuYasha and Kagome fan. But when the words came to me for Sesshoumaru and Kagome... I was like awwe man, heads are gonna roll when they read this. I sorta challenged myself when I was writing this because a few years ago a read this one shot poem called...uggh I can't recall it at this exact moment but, it portrayed InuYasha and Kagome and Kagomes' virginity being taken away from her for the first time and voices like her mom and her sub-conscience telling her that this is all wrong. But because the sex is so great and what InuYasha is doing to her feels so pleasurable she just can't 'fight the lust' (that was a line in the poem if I remember correctly). But anyways, because of this one poem that I read years later (my favorite fics I print and save and show off to my friends... some of you guys and gals out there are some wonderful writers) I decided that if she could do it I could do it too. And alas here is the piece de resistance. Mwah!!! I hope you all enjoy!!!

wow i could never write a poem -_- and well wow ^_^ me like very much

This is one hell of a one-shot poem! I can almost see a story prctically begging to be written. Will you write it?

'Till we meet again, ja ne.

Phoenix

nice

new twist I haven't seen yet

I like it

hehe.

good job!

I like it even though I don't like poetry.

This is good......real good

I loved it!!! Wow that was amazing!!! I loved how you managed to tell the story like that!!! I loved it!! Please write more!!!!

that was awesome.