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YESSSSSSSSSSS finally a good old lemon chapter. I really love your mind. plezzz update ASAFP.

Peace & Love BastardOmega

Chapter 29 left me roaring with laughter... Even when you're sick you are brilliant!! Just loving this story all the way through. Best of luck with the nomination, it is well deserved. I wanted to ask you a Q re: something you said in a review for my story. If you get a chance, email me dropbox13@hotmail.com Looking forward to the next chapter, I can always count on your story brightening my day!! Metsuki- babaa

Good chapter as always, and I hope you get more than the nomination for Best Comedy. I think you deserve it.

However, some constructive criticism:

As much as I'm enjoying this story--it's a lemon, yes, but the sex is pure love and not just wham bam thank you ma'am--I have to wonder where it's going. I think you're going to give us a happy ending at some point, but it's lost something of the original plotline. By all means keep up the eroticism, but also work in a definite plot for the sex to take place against.

Also--and maybe it's my own opinion of Kagome being too peaches and cream--I don't see her being that manipulative of Inuyasha. Seemed a little OOC for her, but people *do* change.

Finally, the infighting between Inuyasha and his conscience is what made this story great, but now you may be overdoing it a little. He's developing a split personality.

But hey, none of this means I'll stop reading! Hope you feel better (and thanks for the reviews on my stories)!

Thanks a lot.
It may not the exact InuYasha but I guess it is close enough. And who cares anyway as soon as Sango love to be tied? ;)

Must. Read. The. Ramen. Lemon! Please, please, please write that soon...there's just not enough good quality Inu/Kag lemon on the web and since you're one talented author, as this story so proves it, I would like to beg you on my knees to write it. Not only is it sexy but this story is funny as well. Congrats on the nomination and hope to see more from you soon!

nice chapter, but no lemon. OK I admit it am a hentai. and poor u, sick as a dog. update soon and i hope u get better.

Peace & Love BastardOmega

Oh, this is glorious! I love it! I stumbled across this story, which is up for IYFanguild's best comedy, and I have been chortling ever since. :) Last chapter's baby ducks made me howl and wipe the tears out of my eyes. I could just see Kagome's three friends following them around like a line of ducks, haha. And this chapter, six I believe, and Miroku's singular perseverence to "distract" Sango had me laughing so hard I choked. Ever the martyr, hmm, Miroku? LOLOLOL

You are wonderful. I needed this.

Fate

LOL. Funny! I love this story. It is extremely hot and sexy but also so damn FUN! I look forward to seeing what happens at the hot springs.

OMG HOW COULD YOU JUST LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THAT THAT WAS CRUEL. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.

I am so glad I found this story. I kept looking at inu/kag pairing and this story wasn't there any more. I love it, please more!