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September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol
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September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely GREAT!!! Everyone is SO true to character and the story WRITTEN VERY EXCELLENTLY and it is hilarious- - -PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DO MANY MANY MORE CHAPTERS!!!
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwww he cares if she crys thats so sweat
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
warning at the beginning of this fic should read:
1.)one should not have even a partially filled bladder when beginning to read this fic (unless wearing adult diapers).
2a.)one should not be drinking any beverage while reading this fic (drowning is inevitable, if said beverage is carbonated; nasal and esophageal membranes burn like fire).
...2b.)make sure to cover keyboard and have paper towels handy, as resulting spray will surely go everywhere.
3.)one should pause frequently in their reading in order to breathe (impossible to do while actually reading this fic).
4.)make sure to be firmly planted on a sturdy chair as explosive laughter could catapult one's body off the chair uncomfortably onto floor.
a real trip, can't wait for more!
thank you,
ginny
1.)one should not have even a partially filled bladder when beginning to read this fic (unless wearing adult diapers).
2a.)one should not be drinking any beverage while reading this fic (drowning is inevitable, if said beverage is carbonated; nasal and esophageal membranes burn like fire).
...2b.)make sure to cover keyboard and have paper towels handy, as resulting spray will surely go everywhere.
3.)one should pause frequently in their reading in order to breathe (impossible to do while actually reading this fic).
4.)make sure to be firmly planted on a sturdy chair as explosive laughter could catapult one's body off the chair uncomfortably onto floor.
a real trip, can't wait for more!
thank you,
ginny
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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. Keep it up. You are doing really good with this story.
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwww inu actualy relised that he wants her ino he wont not let her go.
hahahahahahah hojo bashin
please update soon
hahahahahahah hojo bashin
please update soon
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww, you updated!!! That helped make my day!!! Please continue with your excellent masterpiece--I really like it!!!
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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far -- nicely written, as well -- a rarity on AFF. I like the premise and I'm glad you're not going the whole 'rampage!Inuyasha' now that the beads are off -- although I feel bad that the gang thinks Inuyasha could do that -- where's their trust? ...man, yea of little faith ^_^
My only peeve is the 'chan' suffix being used. Only Sango calls Kagome 'Kagome-chan'(and Kagome calls her Sango-chan) --NEVER Inuyasha -- he's too rude to ever use it with anyone (Sango, too)-- it's an honorific -- and could you ever see Inuyasha 'honoring' anyone?? ^_^ Miroku would say 'Kagome-sama' (a 'step up' from 'chan') and Shippou only uses Kagome (he's a kid and I'm not sure if it's something you would use toward your elders?? of course, Kagome calls him 'Shippou-chan'), as well. Just thought I'd let you know -- I only watch the 'subs' and it's slightly jarring to read it otherwise :) No offense.
I do like your fic and I'm hoping you update REALLY soon ^_^ -- like I said, it's so refreshingly well-written....................bring on the citrus!!...Oh the possibilities ^_^.....but I can wait -- patiently -- for the 'good stuff' ^_~
My only peeve is the 'chan' suffix being used. Only Sango calls Kagome 'Kagome-chan'(and Kagome calls her Sango-chan) --NEVER Inuyasha -- he's too rude to ever use it with anyone (Sango, too)-- it's an honorific -- and could you ever see Inuyasha 'honoring' anyone?? ^_^ Miroku would say 'Kagome-sama' (a 'step up' from 'chan') and Shippou only uses Kagome (he's a kid and I'm not sure if it's something you would use toward your elders?? of course, Kagome calls him 'Shippou-chan'), as well. Just thought I'd let you know -- I only watch the 'subs' and it's slightly jarring to read it otherwise :) No offense.
I do like your fic and I'm hoping you update REALLY soon ^_^ -- like I said, it's so refreshingly well-written....................bring on the citrus!!...Oh the possibilities ^_^.....but I can wait -- patiently -- for the 'good stuff' ^_~
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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating...I loved the two chapters.
I hope you update soon,
Chanda
I hope you update soon,
Chanda
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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think your doing great! She just keeps going for poor Inu's "sensitive area" I can't wait to read more ^.^