rate_review Reviews

Ok... I almost peed in my pants. I love this story sooo much. You have to up date soon!

I was so into your story I lost track of time. Now I only have 20 minutes to work on my own. But it was worth it!!!

Great chapter, especially the last...though I do wonder if Shippo and Miroku are developing a death wish.

i have already learned my lesson... swallow my drink first, then read (no need to make up the warning if i hadn't already experienced these things at one time or another).

looks like everyone is learning some pretty important and hilarious lessons...
* waiting in eager anticipation for more *

ginny
>=P

You sure did let Koga have it...LMAO. That was original. Look forward until yorur next update.

Chanda

I am so sad right now. I want more and there is no more. This story totally rocks!You need to hurry up and up date soon. Like right now would be great. Ok well at least as soon as possible.

well what can i say. NEXT CHAPTER.

Peace & Love BastardOmega

hehehe MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hoo boy, where to begin...

This story is among the best I've ever read, certainly in the top ten. I was afraid you wouldn't keep writing this; very pleasantly surprised to see that you are. A few notes I made (didn't do any for Chaps. 1 or 2)...

Chapter 3: Kagome finds another way to make Inuyasha sit. Comedy gold, though I'm sure he didn't think so.
Chapter 4: A bit of a nod to Evangelion here? It was entirely in character though. Excellent job on the dialogue.
Chapter 5: The internal monologue is one of the things that makes this story so good. Keep it up. And blindness? Damn!
Chapter 6: By far the funniest look at Miroku and Sango I've ever seen. I always knew Miroku was a masochist; never considered he was a martyr, too.
Chapter 7: Kind of surprised Inuyasha didn't get on his hands and knees here. Granted, that would be VERY unusual for a man to do in feudal Japan, but it's kind of an unusual situation.
Chapter 8: Fell out of my chair watching Inuyasha dig his own grave. Souta's reaction was perfect.

I know this isn't much of a critique, but you're doing so well so far, I don't think you need any criticism! Keep writing!

I'm loving this story...the comic relief is great. I look forward to your next update.

Chanda

maybe you should put that warning (my previous review) before every chapter... i think i dislocated something...

hurts to breathe!
ginny