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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally you wrote lemons and 1-10 8+ keep it up.
Peace & love BastardOmega
Peace & love BastardOmega
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is so cute >.
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahay! The stupid comp jacked up! It cut of my enitire review! :P Oh well I was just saying it was cute, loved the dramatic irony, the way the story flows realy well, the contrast between the relationship of Sangoand Miroku and Kagome and Inuyasha. I also like how the characters are well deceloped in the way of how they act. Like sango just dosent come right out and say she loves Miroku, like I am anxious to hear!! ( Poor Houshi!) And how I was so sad when she was reluctant, but that how someone one would realy act in a situation like that. Plus, I love Miroku citrus to so that dosent hurt my liking to this story!
~~~~~~~ <3 PyroChi
~~~~~~~ <3 PyroChi
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved it that was such a wonderful story omg it was funny romantic and had an actual plot ever think about becoming an author and publishing books you would be awsome at it
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A Lemon Newbie? Dayum, good job. Whodathunkit? Great story, I'm eating it up. Actually, I'd eat Miroku up given half a chance, but you're giving me lovely evil thoughts. Yayyyyyyyyyy for a great story!
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what... i'm confused... why couldn't she bite him again?
btw: love the story so far!!!
btw: love the story so far!!!
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ai ya woman!!! first let me say, miro and sango from behind, kags and inu dacing each other.... that's a new one lol... although miro is quite the dog.. lol
anyways... yeah, seeing inu in a fundoshi would call for extreme droolage.. although picturing miro the way sango saw him, that was some extreme droolage too!
i gotta say though, i'm definately more interested in the miro/sango in this... well, mainly just miro. although the inu/kags is more sweet, the miro/san is way hot..
miro is hot. THIS STORY IS HOT!! HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT!!!
more please!!
anyways... yeah, seeing inu in a fundoshi would call for extreme droolage.. although picturing miro the way sango saw him, that was some extreme droolage too!
i gotta say though, i'm definately more interested in the miro/sango in this... well, mainly just miro. although the inu/kags is more sweet, the miro/san is way hot..
miro is hot. THIS STORY IS HOT!! HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT!!!
more please!!
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
::screams and dances around happily:: Awesome!! You're awesome!! (and the story kicks ass, too ^_^) SOOOOO loving how you update so frequently!!!!! Absobalilutely love it!!!!!!!!!! You've got great talent (and habits!!!)!!!!
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was great! They finally got to consumate the marriage's. Great two chapters.
Chanda
Chanda
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now this was good...read it all in, well...almost one sitting, lol. Gotta hand it to ya, ya really had the characters down pat. And for theis being you first lemons...w00t! they were pretty good. ANyways, update when you can. :D