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for This is Gonna be Fun (uncensored)

by szaugg

person chanda
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lked your biting theory...although it is very animalistic. And personally don't mind the teeth...just not to hard. *Blushing*

Miroku. Damn! I love his character, he just can't seem to get enough of Sango. I thought Inuyasha would play that part. Love the twist...keep them coming. LOL.

Kidnapped again. I wonder who took them this time? Look forward until your next chapter.

Chanda
person SayanaTheRover
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
::screams:: Okay, you did NOT just leave such a cruel cliffhanger!!!! Please update your beautiful, exciting story as soon as possible!!! ^_^ I can hardly wait!!!
person entropy9
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch. 21...BEST LEMON EVER! I mean it...it was hot, sweet, cute, funny...perfect. I'm serious, I'm a picky reader and you are just one of my new faves! please accept my highest compliments...on to the next chapter...whew... I need a cool shower...or a man:P
person entropy9
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what?! I just read the part where you said those were your first lemons an dmy jaw dropped...I swear i didn't know that when I reviewed before..I think when people write lemons they fall into the cliches and they all seem the same. maybe that's why yours was so good...it was fresh and sweet...not smutty or cheesy...i'm so amazed! good job!
person me again (entropy9)
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
last review...I'm going to bed but I wanted to ask about this paragraph;
Inuyasha watched Miroku’s hand slide down to Sango’s bottom and squeeze as he pulled her closer. His other hand was busy doing who knew what with the front of Sango’s kimono, but whatever it was, it was making her arousal climb steadily higher. She whimpered against him, rolling her hips against his pelvis, and Inuyasha finally turned away. He swallowed and shifted uncomfortably, covertly reaching down to adjust himself under his clothes. Damn hentai, he cursed, irritated.
This is from Inuyasha's viewpoint, so does that mean he can sense Sango's arousal? I thought it was new moon night..maybe I read it wrong, but I just wanted to tell you just in case. great chap. can't wait fo rthe next..oh yeah you are great at updating, thanks for that! goodnight!
person adea neri
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love the fic. continue to update
person paula jean
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it but why didnt he want her to bite him and will she?....lol
person silent pluto
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god what an idiot! Why couldn't he just say he loved the girl!!!
lol Your writing is great i loved it!!!!
hehehe
person XxSangoxX (N,S,I.)
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ha! yes finnalllly

hey no worries. I have miroku and sango get it on in my Inu.kag stories too.

i mean come o n... how could you not..that chemistry is just so...t empting.

damn i'm tired i'll go read 22 and then i'm goin to sleep. at 439 lol
person Anon
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice.

j\udkjao;ji i'm all hot and bothered grrr it's five am.