rate_review Reviews

what the...?

that's crazed. I hope they get out of that.

Your story is the funniest damn fanfiction I've ever read. It's so delightful. And even though things get a little outrageous at times you still stay true to the characters which makes this that much more enjoyable to read. And if that was your first lemon, then congrats. Really. I mean you nailed them. They were both really well done and Inu/Kag's especially was great because it managed to be both hot AND funny at the same time. Bravo. But despite all the wonderful citrus my favorite pairing from your story is the friendship between Miroku and InuYasha. I don't think I've read any other fanfic that made their friendship just seem so funny and realistic. I could totally see two guys acting that way with each other. Just how they tease and bug the shit out of one another but still really care about each other in a totally heterosexual life-partner kinda way. I check this site all the time to see if you've updated and I'm sad to know I'll no longer be spoiled with the two chapters at a time updates. It'll be worth the wait though I'm sure. Can't wait to see if the girls come to the rescue of our poor "virgin" boys. My utmost respect goes to you for such a enjoyable story and I hope to read more soon.

Oooohs how r they to make it b4 the grlz find them? My fav line out of the new chpts "he looks like somebody took sex & poured it out as a man" Hell yeah! Loving this story luved when Miroku got slapped & punched b4 he had the opportunity 2 turn around.

"The last two chapters have the first two lemons I’ve ever written in my life. Sooooo, how’d I do? ;-)"

Pretty damn good, I'd say! You managed to make a love scene both romantic, interesting, and humorous--the way it should be. Too many lemons fall into rote patterns; I was wondering how the "payoff" would be here. I wasn't disappointed. You handled both Kagome and Inuyasha and Miroku and Sango very well. (One problem I did have with the latter...there were parts that made it seem Miroku was taking Sango against her will, though she later got into things. Granted, this is Miroku and Sango, but it came a little close to rape in a few places.)

What makes this story such a good one is that the lemon is part of the story, rather than the story being part of the lemon! Great job (and thanks for the review on my story).

Oh, you're sneaky....I never thought it would be Inuyasha and Miroku taken...Again nice twist. This chapter cracked me up. I love it and look forward until your next update.

Chanda

LMRFAO Simply splendid!!!! Darn, am I gonna miss your frequent updates ::tragic sigh:: but I'll still always check, just in case!!! I'm hopelessly addicted ^_^

*Weeping with joy and humor* Thank you so much for making Miroku...so...sexy. I love that he's humourous and dark with slick strength. I so wish I was Sango he can bite me anytime. Thank you so very very very very very much.

oh my word this is so funny. Please write more.

OMG!! Halfway through this delightful fic, and I just had to stop and say something. After ch.9 and 10 and laughing so hard I had tears streaming down my cheeks, I have to say ... THANK YOU!!! You have made my day... no, actually you've made my week (since this is Friday). I really needed that laugh... you are no less than BRILLIANT!!

Chapter 22.. What can I say.. That chapter had everything.. I was laughing and crying. You can just feel the love.
Thanks