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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, this may just be the best fan fic I've ever read. If you don't become an author you are just wasting your gifts. I mean, this was seriously better than some of the stuff I've read that's been published. Seriously, and I'm pretty critical over writing. It was really good and you must write more. Now, I'm off to see what else you've written.
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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving it so far. I am sad that now we'll have to wait a whole week before you up date again. I look forward to whats going to happen next!
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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
his just keeps getting better and better.. virginal sacrafices lol. anyways. i liked the explanation of the mating ritual. it's definelty something i've never heard anyone using before, so i enjoyed the explanation!
keep writing and i cant wait for more!!
keep writing and i cant wait for more!!
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October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't review that often but I just had to say the last chapter cracked me up. I love the whole Miroku and InuYasha being sacrificed as virgins bit... The loose interprotation of the guidelines was great. I look forward to the next chapter.
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just want to let you know your doing a great job. I thought this story was so good I told my sister about it and now we're both hooked. Your lemon was perfect! And I almost cried when he told her he loved her. I'm off the read more and I hope soon Inuyasha and Kagome will make their marrage final too.
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the fic so far!! It's very funny and the loving parts a ahem good^^ Hope you will update soon!! I'm Loving it!!
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SOOOOOO GOOOOOD! Oh my word so good! Please continue to write and finish the story. I can't get enough of it. Very nicely in character, detailed events *ahem*, and great plot developement. You really need a medal as a reward or something with such good writing!!! Keep it up! I'm looking forward to the rest of your story telling. ^^
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great twist! (you twisted thing you)
I can just SEE the look on our boys' faces. heh.
I can just SEE the look on our boys' faces. heh.
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying your story. I've recommended it on my forum. Keep the updates coming, please. Thanks.
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just happy grins....I need a cold shower now...