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Ohhh! No fair, lol. I wanted Sango to punish her husband some more, and surprise him by "going down on him" as Kagome had suggested. LOL

Hahaha, The missing underwear has finally showed itself in the story. Very nice transition! Keep it up.

hi great story here. umm i know you mention you love writing citrus about miroku, but please, please don't forget the inu/kago couple ne? i really hope to see their more intimate moment soon :) great job and please update.

GREAT chapter, but, i think am speaking for all who reads this story, NEXT CHAPTER NOW ASAFP. FUCKING CLIFFHANGER you can be mean sometimes.

Peace & Love BastardOmega

This story came highly recomended to me by a friend and I thought I'd give it a shot. The plot was good, it's very hard to this subject handled well; the characters were in character enough for me to keep reading; your writing is definitly above the standard for AFF.net. Unforunately, I could not read past chapter 3 of this fanfic.

I found your use of Japanese honorifics to be distracting because they weren't how the Inuyasha team would normally refer to each other. There is no canon basis to Miroku calling Sango "Sango-sama." But what really threw me was when Inuyasha refered to Kagome as "Kagome-chan" in the third chapter. When I brought this up to my friend she told me you later explain this as being sarcastic, but I could not see that in the sentence, or in the character, and still find myself unable to read further.

I do wish you the best with the story because it is interesting and well written. Good luck.

THIS IS FUN, IM LOVING IT.

That was a funny chapter. I'd be horny as all get out too if I was being treated like that as well. My fav line was Shippo's side remark "If you give me yoru next helping of Kagome's snacks, I'll tell you what they said later." I was like that is very Shippo. Look forward to reading what Miroku does and if Sango has her taste of her husband.

You're KILLING me... Large and naked Miroku, my ass! (uh, wellllllll... )
ARGH!~ more, please?

Great wording, your error/typo count is low, and you have obviously thought the direction of this fic through. I have actually found myself laughing aloud a number of times throughout the chapters and that is saying something! I am a bit disappointed that Kikyou was simply hacked up and sucked into a mirror... I'd have really enjoyed seeing a bit of angst when Kikyou found out about the marriage, and maybe have seen Inuyasha scrambling to placate both women and failing miserably. Or rather both 'woman and clay pot'. ^_~ But you have certainly accomplished your stated goal of writing a sexy comedic romance. When I get around to figuring out how to add more fics to my 'recommendations' page, expect to see this one on the list.

And while your premise isn't exactly unheard of (i.e. the rosary breaks), you did take the idea in surprising directions. HILARIOUS directions, I might add. That being said, I can't help but feel like the plot has some untapped potential. For instance, when Inuyasha thinks that Kagome is scared of him as a result of the beads being broken, I think you could have milked it. Serious, romantic, or funny, any way, the scenario could have been taken further. Not that what you did was BAD, I was just hoping for more...

I do hope that you continue to write fics and also that some of them revolve around Inu/Kag and Mir/San, like this one. What can I say? I'm a sucker for those couples. Please keep up the excellent work!

You are officially my hero!!!! You always update so quickly, and more to the fact--they're GOOD updates ^_^ Please, never give up on your craft!!!I love it!!!!