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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
fucking YES
that's so damn hot.
that's so damn hot.
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic chapter!! I nearly fell off my chair laughing... brilliant as always. I am so impressed with your in-depth examination of the characters, and its just so 'right on'. Never stop... please!
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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it...but when are you gonna update????
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my fucking god, this is just too damn hilarious.. i love it, keep writing you have some real talent.
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well, that was a good beginning, although why Inuyasha didn't go for everyone...? The beads give Kagome control over him, but if he were to go ape-shit toward someone else if he wanted, she wouldn't be able to stop it now, eh? I gues its romantic that he goes for her first, but I'd of thought he'd of mangled Shippo a little first....heh heh. just my opinion, but wow, I don't think that you are an author that needs advice!
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
@2: love the banter betwn Sango and the monk...so true, so true...
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Boy-howdy, do you know how to write one awesome fanfic! =D I've enjoyed every little bit of this fic, seriously. Your mix of humor and sexiness is spot-on, which often leads to some really touching moments that totally catch the reader off-guard (in a good way). And (though it may be blasphemous to say) I just can't get over how much I like your interpretations of the characters more than canon.
I mean, you've made me believe that these characters can COMMUNICATE with each other while retaining their own interesting personalities, quirks, and issues. I've never seen Inuyasha and Kagome be so functionally dysfunctional. It's just a delight to read. And Miroku! Whoo, I'm developing a fangirl crush all over again! He's so sexy and witty at the same time. Last, but perhaps not least, I've gotta give you props for actually giving Shippou an appropriate part is a story that is, well, a lot of smut. =) His bits are just hilarious and totally in character.
So, there you have it. Characters: likeable. Plot: interesting. Humor: gut-busting. Smut: delicious. =D I'd better stop gushing now, or it might go to your head. ;) Unless that gets me more fics from you, in which case, nevermind!
I mean, you've made me believe that these characters can COMMUNICATE with each other while retaining their own interesting personalities, quirks, and issues. I've never seen Inuyasha and Kagome be so functionally dysfunctional. It's just a delight to read. And Miroku! Whoo, I'm developing a fangirl crush all over again! He's so sexy and witty at the same time. Last, but perhaps not least, I've gotta give you props for actually giving Shippou an appropriate part is a story that is, well, a lot of smut. =) His bits are just hilarious and totally in character.
So, there you have it. Characters: likeable. Plot: interesting. Humor: gut-busting. Smut: delicious. =D I'd better stop gushing now, or it might go to your head. ;) Unless that gets me more fics from you, in which case, nevermind!
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very sexy.
^_^
Inu should kiss her toes... that's so cute.
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Miroku...I have to sympathize with the guy, but on the other hand, he did deserve it. Good job of building the reader up and then dropping them like a rock. Should be interesting to see how this turns out.
When it comes to the honorifics, Miroku doesn't refer to Sango as "Lady Sango" in the English IY translation(which would probably be translated from "Sango-sama"); Kagome, however, does. Though Sango is of peasant stock and technically wouldn't rate a "sama" from him, Miroku might use the honorific to be polite or score points, even if he doesn't do so in the manga. It would be impolite for him merely to call her Sango, without at least a "san" as that implies a familiarity he doesn't have (in your story, it would be fine because they're married). Inuyasha gets away with it because he's unmannerly as hell. While Miroku could get away with calling her "Sango-chan" before they were married (it's been only recently that male students have adopted the honorific "kun" to address female classmates; they usually got only a "chan"), he probably wouldn't because it's insulting. And we know what happens to monks who insult Sango.
Just my two yen...
When it comes to the honorifics, Miroku doesn't refer to Sango as "Lady Sango" in the English IY translation(which would probably be translated from "Sango-sama"); Kagome, however, does. Though Sango is of peasant stock and technically wouldn't rate a "sama" from him, Miroku might use the honorific to be polite or score points, even if he doesn't do so in the manga. It would be impolite for him merely to call her Sango, without at least a "san" as that implies a familiarity he doesn't have (in your story, it would be fine because they're married). Inuyasha gets away with it because he's unmannerly as hell. While Miroku could get away with calling her "Sango-chan" before they were married (it's been only recently that male students have adopted the honorific "kun" to address female classmates; they usually got only a "chan"), he probably wouldn't because it's insulting. And we know what happens to monks who insult Sango.
Just my two yen...
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okey, hate to be such a whiner all the time, but.. No, I actually like it.
I REALLY feel like this is more like a Sango/Miroku fic. Because they are having most of the action. Or it's just me who feels like that?
The bottom line is, that this fic would probably be better off at the general category instead of Inuyasha/Kagome category. I truly enjoy reading your stuff, and worship and adore you, but Sango is soooooooooo boring as a character that I don't really fancy reading anything remotely related to her. That's why I skip all the Miroku/Sango action and.. whoops, nothing else is left. I suggest you either move this fic to a more suitable category or like.. I dunno, kill Sango and Miroku.
I REALLY feel like this is more like a Sango/Miroku fic. Because they are having most of the action. Or it's just me who feels like that?
The bottom line is, that this fic would probably be better off at the general category instead of Inuyasha/Kagome category. I truly enjoy reading your stuff, and worship and adore you, but Sango is soooooooooo boring as a character that I don't really fancy reading anything remotely related to her. That's why I skip all the Miroku/Sango action and.. whoops, nothing else is left. I suggest you either move this fic to a more suitable category or like.. I dunno, kill Sango and Miroku.