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for The Mysterious Stranger

by kimisan

person Ryukotsusei
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really can't wait to see what exactly they think of each other when they actually get to speak with one another. Good chapter, I hope you update soon. *sends you Hiei cookies*
person Amanda
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is an awsome story so far. I can't wait to see where you take it.
person Kurama'sFoxyMiko
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was soo sweet! I was so touched that It brought tears to my eyes. I can't wait to read more with this pairing. I've always wanted to read a Akabane/Kagome pairing, And I finally got to read one. Even if it was just an encounter between the two. Hope to read more from you.
person Kage Otome (NSI)
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was nice, sweet, I really liked it. Just out of curiosity, will the "stories" be tied together somehow? Or will they each be different? Anyway, keep up the good work, loved it!
person Katie
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You made me cry with Inuyasha's letter, which is a good thing. Only good fics can envoke emotions in a reader.

Akabane x Kagome is very interesting. I would have chosen Ban x Kagome for a GB x IY fic but I'm interested all the same. Are you going to continue this? Please do. I'll await the next chapters eagerly.
person Ryukotsusei
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As I stated before when we talked on yahoo, I love the last line in this. I think that summed up Akabane's thoughts perfectly. I think as far as it goes, there was absolutely no need for a lemon in this first chapter. It's perfect the way it is. Keep up the good work, I am really looking forward to reading more of this unique pairing. *Sends you Akabane cookies*