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October 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's really good and interesting so far. Other than needing spell check, sentence formating and the separation of paragraphs so it's easier to read, I enjoyed your chapter. Try to get a beta to help you with the writing aspect, you need no help with your creativity and grabbing a readers interest with your story telling, just help with the writing. Fix that and your story will be the focus not your grammar or spelling. Inuyasha rescuing the girl at the end was really cute.
I hope you have not been discouraged from writing, people can be harsh. Keep trying and remember first and foremost your writing for yourself first. Practice makes perfect lol. I've only written two fics that no one reads lol but I enjoy writing, assume you do as well so don't let anyone stop ya you will improve, if you want to that is. good luck I'll stop talking your head of now lol :)
I hope you have not been discouraged from writing, people can be harsh. Keep trying and remember first and foremost your writing for yourself first. Practice makes perfect lol. I've only written two fics that no one reads lol but I enjoy writing, assume you do as well so don't let anyone stop ya you will improve, if you want to that is. good luck I'll stop talking your head of now lol :)
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Be honest, is this your first language? The grammar made me throw up. (literally, I have food poisining from some bad bread apparently)But you misused words, you said things twice, it is a nightmare. Excuse me...
PS
"I thought I'd pretend I was one of those deaf-mutes."
~The Laughing Man
PS
"I thought I'd pretend I was one of those deaf-mutes."
~The Laughing Man