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March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Im not goting to flame you promise...to make this fic really rock, all you need is two things, a beta and a muse...If you want, I am offering my services...just email me if you want me to help...I don't agree with the other reviewers, they have no right to be mean about it.My first fic was far worse then this, but I think I'm an ok writer now...I still have a few mistakes here and there, but that's why I have a beta.And like I said I am offering my services as a beta and muse...just incase my email didn't show up on here, it's KadishCu2006@aol.com. Or you can IM me at yaoigurl06@yahoo.com...think about it ok.
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January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHat the heck is this? no offence but where in world did you learn to write man, this bad beyond bad sorry but it is
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i gotta say... YOU SUCK HUGE HORSE TESTES
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You need to learn to use punctuation and capitalization. The story might have been decent if the text had been readable.
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't want to be mean but you still need to go over your fic or get a beta to help you out...