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for The Jewel Of My Heart

by KogasAngel

person TenkiTenchi
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ogenai Please continue writing the story is comming along really well.
person Anime Punk Kitty
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! the suspense is killing!
I REALLY need to know what is going to happen... T_T
You got me ADDICTED to this story! ^_^ not that is a bad thing
I can't wait until Kuronue gonna get his body back *fangirl scream*

Please update soon! Ja ne
person Diane
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this & can't wait for more. I did find a minor goof in this sentence though, I think Youko should be Kuronue instead; When Kouga snapped that he wanted to speak to Kagome, Youko moved from around the corner and opened his mouth, “What do you want to talk to me about?” Hope this helps.
person babygirl
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well done. I love it. but i wonder are you going to give him a body? i think it would be great it you did. Well anyway keep up the great work. Untill next time see ya
person purp1ebabe
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
o yay a new chap... its been a while. interesting how everything is turning out. i hope the next chap comes up soon cuz i cant wait to read it!!!!
person Beggar
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YOU ARE SO CRUEL!!! HOW CAN YOU LEAVE IT LIKE THAT! I'M GOING TO DIE!! DIE, DIE FROM SUSPENSE OMG WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT AND YES I'M AWARE I'M TYPING IN ALL CAPS. I'M JUST THAAAAAAAT EXCITED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!! OMGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
person Anime sweetie
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehehehe I loved that end, he gt caught. Now I can't wait to see what happens next. So please update soon!
person Katie
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Youko is very sharp! This is getting better and better. I can't wait for Kagome and Kurama to meet and for Kagome and Youko to mate. I feel bad for Kuronue but I'm not giving up hope for him yet. D: I love this!
person Honda
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How did Youko know it was Kuronue? What is Kuronue going to do now? Will Kagome be okay? Can Kuronue talk to her in her dreams? Update soon! I don't expect any answers for my questions but I'm really looking forward to your next chapter!
person Vyncent
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I totally love the unique approach with this story. It is great. The intrique and drama was excellent. This one is right up there with my top favorites which also include your wonderful "A Question of Honour", "Striking A Deal", "Midsummer Night's Dream", "Something To Talk About", "Close Encounters Of The Fluffy Kind", and "Winds Of Change". Please update soon!

Sincerely,
Vyncent